by MicKay
I am amazed and hooked on your unique story. Keep writing!
Meridian
I truly enjoy following your work. Your characters are fascinating on all levels. I eagerly await your next chapter.
AND I WAIT FOR EACH INSTALLMENT WITH ANTICIPATION, KEEP IT COMING
Edward's answers just made me think of more questions. Looking forward to Gabe's return.
One question are Alena's eyes melted chocolate as you stated in chapter.1 or are they hazel as you say in chapter.4 maybe you should go back and edit ch.1 so it is in keeping with the rest of the story. I am loving the story so far, please post more soon! Must say my favourite character is Gabe and I hope everything goes as he desires!
To be changed or not to be changed? That is the question!
Nauti Nymph
You have probably heard this a thousand times already, but I really think you should publish your work. I read a lot, but this is one of the best "books" I have ever read! You have a beautiful way of describing emotions, motions and progress of the storyline. No excessive use of words, you keep to the essentials and keep a wonderful flow in the story. I absolutely love your work! Keep on; I hope the rest is just as amazing as what I have read so far! With love and respect; Celia