All Comments on 'New Kingdom: American Court Ch. 06'

by MicKay

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zouzounizouzouniabout 14 years ago
It is ....

wonderfully, incredibly, fantastically good ... as always!

Meridian13Meridian13about 14 years ago
Delightfully Refreshing

I am amazed and hooked on your unique story. Keep writing!

Meridian

AngelePoemAngelePoemabout 14 years ago
Always a joy to read!

I truly enjoy following your work. Your characters are fascinating on all levels. I eagerly await your next chapter.

xhallexhalleabout 14 years ago
sinfully good

i fall more in love with your story the more i read it.

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
THIS JUST GETS BETTER

AND I WAIT FOR EACH INSTALLMENT WITH ANTICIPATION, KEEP IT COMING

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Amazing!!!!

Superb as always...

waiting for the next chapter...

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 14 years ago
Hmm.

Edward's answers just made me think of more questions. Looking forward to Gabe's return.

willieonewillieoneabout 14 years ago
Love it!

One question are Alena's eyes melted chocolate as you stated in chapter.1 or are they hazel as you say in chapter.4 maybe you should go back and edit ch.1 so it is in keeping with the rest of the story. I am loving the story so far, please post more soon! Must say my favourite character is Gabe and I hope everything goes as he desires!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oooh! This is so good!

To be changed or not to be changed? That is the question!

Nauti Nymph

celia82celia82over 12 years ago
Beautiful!

You have probably heard this a thousand times already, but I really think you should publish your work. I read a lot, but this is one of the best "books" I have ever read! You have a beautiful way of describing emotions, motions and progress of the storyline. No excessive use of words, you keep to the essentials and keep a wonderful flow in the story. I absolutely love your work! Keep on; I hope the rest is just as amazing as what I have read so far! With love and respect; Celia

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