All Comments on 'New Kingdom: American Court Ch. 11'

I love the twist at the end. You've wrapped it all up very nicely! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I can;t wait to see what happens with the children!!

That was crazy i love it Now how is this going to play out?

Nice step forward!

I still want to see Alena become FULL vampire.

this story just gets better and better i cant wait to read the next chapter

Wish it had been longer now the wait for more will be driving me mad so please for my sanity post very,very soon!

Gabriel should be the one leading the kingdom. He seems to be the one willing to do what needs to be done and without complaint.

Gabe seems to have a real soft spot for the baby girl, like an adoring daddy! It is so sweet! The name he picked for her says it all Abigail ("a father's joy")

i love this story and cant wait for the next chapter please continue

Can't wait for more to be posted, will be checking daily!! Thankyou for a great story :)

Please keep going!!!!!

Is it just me or does Ch. 10&11 not connect? Chapter 11 doesn't even introduce Emma and Anthony properly whatsoever and when you finally do introduce them properly it's AFTER the fight in America where Helen was involved. It especially confused and irrated me (since I couldn't see how it was possible) that George died in america but lives in Italy and works for Anthony. Big WTF! I really wouldve enjoyed the whole series if the plot was a little more organized.

I'm not mocking your stories (infact I do love the many diffrent genres you lightly touch base, on compared to other literotica members whose only use for the website is to write really crappy stories) I am merely just commenting constructive criticisim on behalf of any future stories that you may write, I mean you really wouldn't want to intentionally evoke frustration and confusion to any of you readers would you?

I agree with the previous comment. I was really enjoying the series until I hit chapter 11 and then I felt like everything I was reading was pointing to a missing chapter or something...or that maybe they were out of order...good start but confusing middle.

Hey! A revision was submitted for ch 11 of the next series but was posted to NKAC. I've submitted a request to correct but if you'd like, I can email the NKAC Ch 11 to you.

Now how did they figure that out!

how is this possible?? "slowly counting to some unreasonable number with lightening speed. " it doesn't even make sense