All Comments on 'New Life Ch. 03'

hmmm is lucien a were? if he is, why wouldn't anya have known?

Ha I knew it. I knew Lucien was a were

Read the first two chapters and thought the third one had to be better. I was wrong. Anya has no redeeming qualities about her, she is rude, obnoxious, calls people 'nicknames' that they clearly hate and won't stop even when she knows they hate it, doesn't want to be referred to as 'the human' in a compound of were's but has no problem with calling them names. Nothing to like about her.

Your story is a good one, if a little slow moving. However, the grammar is poor as is the spelling. you need to do a better job of spell checking. There really is no excuse, given the tools available.

How much people bitch about FREE content that people contribute in their spare time. Keep writing, LoW. You're creating an interesting world.

We/we are really enjoying this story, do wish chapters where a little longer, keep up the good work and don't listen to the Negative comments they are just being small.

Don't listen to the negative people! I honestly can't wait until the next chapter! :)

i like her tude,but i dont like rereading the same old way a were meets their mate and almost forces their attention on them. she clearly doesnt like him and he wont take no for an answer. since she doesnt know he wants her as his mate and her friends arent telling her how should she feel. being always told you are weak and we know whats best for you puny human is not a way friends or their family show trust or respect. i hope she refuses the mating pull just to be different.

so please do not care what critics may write and continue to write. THX for the great story! XO

Your story is off to a wonderful start and I am excited to read more!!! Thanks for doing a great job!

LOVE the story. Looking forward to the next chapter but PLEASE make them longer.

These are all really good, it would be nice if you could make them longer. I'm loving the story line so far too.

Lucien is a were.

Love the story line so much hope you start making longer chapters!

Love the story line so much possibility, still a lot of grammatical errors though that take away from the story keep writing!

This is a very engaging story. Please hurry up and post more chapters.

It's developing nicely! I want to see more.

keep on writing. i love this so far

When are more chapters coming?

Your editor needs a proofreader.