New Life: The Awakening

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"I have left the training collar for my slaves in the chest. If you so wish to continue training, kneel and lock the collar I have left for you. This will prove to me that you are ready to continue your initiation into your new life. In addition to your training collar, I have left some chains and other bindings here for you to experiment with. There are various toys in there I want you to use. Start off with the smallest plug and the smallest vibrator. Insert both, one right after the other, every day. Start with each in for 10 minutes, then take them out until the next day. Every day for the next two weeks, you will move to the next largest plug and vibrator and extend the time by 10 minutes. In two weeks, you will be able to handle the largest toy in you, for an hour at the least. I will be watching to see if you complete your training. Do not tell anyone of our contact or no one will hear from you again, notice no one saw you were gone for an entire weekend? Think carefully about your life, slave. I will be back for you."

Stunned at the words printed on the letter, I remembered to breathe after a few moments. Licking my lips, my trembling fingers moved to open the chest, my eyes wide as I picked up a slender silver collar, the ends made to lock together with the means of a tiny silver padlock. I studied the beautiful design for a moment before slipping to my knees in front of the couch.

Lowering my head, my trembling fingers slid the cool metal around my throat, almost unable to click the padlocked shut due to my trembling. Taking a deep breath, I closed the lock, the weight of the collar settling upon my throat. My eyes slipped closed as I exhaled, the click of the lock echoing in my head as I imagined my Master watching his slave collar herself, feeling truly happy for the first time in my life.

To be continued...?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Uh, no not really

Aw that’s so sweet, clearly the way to win a girl’s heart is kidnapping, rape and repeated death threats....the ‘rape fantasy” is a common one because society has brainwashed people into thinking of sex as wrong or dirty. It isn’t, because sex between consenting adults is frickin’ awesome. A ‘fantasy rape’ is a scenario where the ‘victim’ is absolved of any responsibility or blame.

The story attempts to introduce the concept of this being consensual by claiming that the rapist wants a D/s relationship with the victim and that he will give her the choice to accept or reject him??!

Call me old fashioned if you will but I prefer my sexual partners to use their words and just ask first. The entire thing gives a really poor impression of D/s and bdsm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Didn't buy this

I didn't buy the set up for a second - the plot and character's reactions were wholly unconvincing and therefore I was unable to empathise or care about what was happening to her. These are the elements you need to work on to develop your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
:)

i really hope i can experiance something like this one day, amazing story thank you :)

bondagekitten775bondagekitten775over 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for reading my story and voting, everyone. I'm pleased you all enjoy it! I didn't think it would go over this well, so I'll see if I can type up a new chapter for you to enjoy. Please keep up the voting, and especially feedback on how to make it better!

XoXoX

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
To be continued...?

I do hope so -- this was a terrific read -- well done!

5 *s and please write more -- soon!

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