All Comments on 'New Neighbour'

As above, more to come.

Such a wonderfully ertoic story of a woman taking control of a young man. Please hope there is more to come as she controls him more and dominates him fully.

Fabulous Story , More please !

Keep it up, yo.

That ranks up there as one of the best I’ve read! Great job.

The premise original. The vocabulary exceptional. Grammar near flawless. The twists unpredictable (enough).

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

This is very sensually written. i loved it and I would sincerely hope it is only the first chapter of a big story. thanks.

Very hot and amazing. Please continue that excellent story!

Cant wait to read more about their growing relationship

Great story! Good character development, and conversations seem natural, not forced. Compelling development as Louise takes control and Tom becomes more aware. I eagerly await the next chapters. Hope Louise’s body is described in more detail soon!

I was totally engrossed in this developing sensuous journey. An excellent build up. I do trust that Louise's persona is described in further detail. I will read with excited anticipation of Tom’s and Louise’s evolving relationship.

Just as a side note: I wonder if Tom’s computer has been updated when Tom’s mother uses his computer😊

But I would have expected an accent of some type. She sounds delightful though. Keep it up cybersub. I have a feeling you like pleasing as well.

Great Story, I hope to see more.

This story is very well written. It's a total mind fuck. Both for Tom and the reader. I don't know if I envy Tom or fear that I might envy him. Ma'am is a seductive and compelling domme.

Excellent build-up in pt.1, developing well over the following installments with me wanting more. I’ve added yourcyberpup as a favourite author.

Nice and slow. Well written. Good dialog.

Five stars.

...was beautifully written! And the teasing! I hope the following installments are as good and wholesome. (And let’s not forget the proper pain)

so well written ! the interplay between the 2 characters are so well thought out !

Very well written and keeping the excitement near to how your sub feels as does the reader xx

But it's could have not could of.

I love the story - and it made me really horny. Thank you, Princess

Thank you all for your positive messages, especially my friend Princess x

About came in my panties reading this , id so love to find a woman like her

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it. Well written and interesting. I can just keep on reading it forever. Thank you!

I adore this story

Good writing, but hard to read. Too cruel for me

Very good! And deliciously kinky.

I'll be reading the next episodes. I hope they have less typos than the last two pages of this first episode...

I love this story so much. Very much looking forward to all subsequent chapters. And I’m reading it whilst in chastity, so not to get off to. Just to connect with another submissive character and relish the joys of service feels incredible. Sent a link to my owner as well.

This is so good. ….. Lucky Tom.

This is a wonderfully erotic story. I found myself getting hard in my chastity tube as I followed Tom and joined him in his exploration of his submissive nature. Well written and an excellent story line.

Biggest bunch of horse shit I have ever heard. There is no 18 year old in the would put up with that shit and not get a piece of out of the deal. The first time he didn't get at least a blowjob , would be the last time.

Lol. Probably best you don't read stuff labelled chastity and submission then buddy. Is there an "angry" category?

Good premise.

Nice buildup.

Could have used some bare breasts. And teasing him with them.

Could have used some description of her pussy. Was it shaved like most porn movies? Is that how he liked it?

Could have used some preliminary licking of pussy lips, with instructions how to proceed to make her happy, before full blown eating her to orgasm.

Fout stars.

Great start. The pace of the story was really nice. Looking forward to reading more.

Oh, this was so delicious. Perhaps one of the very best I have read in quite a while. Thank you.

My neighbour has helped me turn in to the woman i always wanted to be.Onced made up and dressed i felt like a real women.The transformation took some time but i have a womans body complete with 36d breast.As i sat there he was telling me i was now his girl as he ran his hands up and down my stocking covered leggs.His hands found my silk panties and now my hard cock.He told me to relax and he would take good care of me and make me a real woman.He took off my dress bra panties.and told me to be a good girl and open my mouth wide I did as i was told and he slipped his hard cock in to my mouth and told me to start sucking.As i was sucking his wife came home and wanted to join in on the fun.She straped on a dildo and fucked me

an excellent introduction to the series - characters are developed and the piece flows very well. looking forward to reading the rest.

Great story. You would make a great Mistress and me a good submissive.

Excellent. Serious turn on!

I gave this a look out of curiosity, to see if it would have an affect.

Bondage? Ok. Absolute trust required by both parties. Been there done that.

Submission? Ok within reason and consensual agreement. Done that. Both sides.

Letting her get hers first? Goes without saying.

Having access to my computer/phone/whatever? The request may cause me to expire due to excess laughing.

Orgasm denial beyond the session? Fine, as long as both parties are denied. You know, see who blinks first. Once I reached my 20s it's always been the other party that starts begging. That was the first time a girl tried to tell me she would let me know what day I could cum. I told her to hold that thought, called another woman I knew and and allowed the tease to listen in while I made arrangements to stop by within the hour. And tell the other woman why. The look was priceless.

Teasing to build excitement - good. Teasing to acquire/keep control - FU.

Canning? Not a fucking shot. Receiving or giving. IMO, if you have a base need to inflict that much pain to get pleasure, you need help.

Someone coming into my house, telling me what to do, without even an invite?

"Come with me for a moment ma'am." I say as I casually walk her to the front door, open it, and with a gentle push on her lower back continue with, "Welcome to the great outdoors! Come again when you can't stay as long. Have a great day!"

Close door. End scene.

Option 2, Tell her I have to run out and have her leave. Stop going by for two days, ignore her calls/texts/door knocks, let her wake up to you sitting on the corner of her bead at three in the morning, and with a smile that falls well short of your eyes ask, "So Louise, how are you feeling right now?" Pause for affect, "Don't ever let me find you in my house again. We're done." Get up slowly, not breaking eye contact until you turn to leave.

Guess I'm just not sub enough. Oh well.

Thanks for the review. You should write a story, you have a flair for fiction.

To "yourcybersub" don't quit your day job.

Good premise.

But sex is rushed.

Nothing about her breasts, nipples, ass. At least she could have teased him with them.

Four stars.

should be listed in nonconsent. Hes too young and foolish to be able to give informed consent. She's an abuser.

Why does he masturbate every two minutes? Because that’s what 18-year-olds are supposed to do? How does that contribute to the story?

Vittorio Vittorossi

The story was lovely. Maybe the sex was rushed or submission too easy - I don't think I could have held myself back from cumming like that at 18 - but all that fit together in the little world you created at the end of that quiet street. Some of these comments are so harsh. I think constructive criticism is a great compliment, but just complaining seems so out of place.

I would say more, but I have to delve into part two. Thanks for such a lovely story. There were some typos, so if you need a proofreader, I'd be happy to volunteer. : )