by YKN4949
Nice story especially for a new author! I'm going to read your other submission now, keep up the good work
Your story was extremely hot, I had to admit I was turned off at the beginning thinking this was going to be a tranny/female story but the three tranny roommates was an extremely hot twist. I enjoyed the sex scenes a lot but the ending was a bit too abrupt...I think you should have left it open at the very least for future chapters.
This is the second story I´ve read from you and both are really HOT!!!! Love it.
Please keep up the good Work.
I think this was quite inventive. I would love to hear more about the roomates and how their lives progress. Maybe you could describe the clothing they like to wear and how Martina loosens up as she moves up the corporate ladder. Maybe Kim and the landlord get involved in a porno movie starting at a club and going farther then they wanted to.
...A great story with a very inventive (and erotic) twist. I'd love to find roomies like these gurls, please keep up the wonderful writing!
Above board, delicious, bootylicious, awesome, outstanding, just the right amount of sentimental, beautiful, etc etc etc. Thanks for the story.
"Our urethras rubbed against on another pleasantly" this thing that you wrote here, the chance of it ever happening is nil, zero, zip, zilch...unless you are a ghost or an alien or something and you can make your dick not exist in the material plane. I don't know if you are a girl or a dude or trans, but if you are above 18 and not mentally deficient, you should have at least a basic, rudimentary idea of human anatomy. For guys urethra is the duct or passage INSIDE the penis through which both urine & semen(its connected to both your bladder and your testicles) travel to be discharged outside. Its only accessible through the tip of the penis. For girls the urethral orifice is a tiny hole located slightly above the vaginal opening. The function of the urethra is the same except the semen part cuz' A)its only connected to the bladder and B)girls usually don't have testicles. So you see, in both cases unless you manage to loose all the muscle surrounding the urethra, rubbing it, licking it or sucking it(as you are prone to do in your stories here) is completely impossible.
And before you assume I am a medical professional or something like that, I am a 20 year old engineering student and I learned this shit in junior high. So in future check your facts before you post completely retarded shit like this.
Instead of cracking down like that you could just give sensible constructive comments. Shhhheeessshhhhh.
Otherwise, he/she would know enough anatomy and physiology to realize that the male urethra carries both urine and seminal fluid out of the body through the penis. Part of the male urethra (spongy or penile urethra) as the author intends can be felt as a tube that runs underneath the shaft of the penis. While this tube is surrounded by the corpus spongiosum and skin, it can be felt through the skin and clearly distinguished from the corpora cavernosa.
I hope that this person is female and that she has seen a penis in real-life since October, because the comment makes it sound like the extent of this person's knowledge is derived from studying sex education in a Junior High School Health class.
This story has made me so hard I had to have a pull, and put a toy in my ass if only I was getting fucked in both holes at the same time as fucking one that's what I want.
Damn haters it's a story wrap your hand around your girldick and enjoy yourself. I did Tammy
Second story for me too. Very well written and a surprising twist as all three girls turn out to be trans. Story made me rock hard. On to the next!