All Comments on 'New Shoes'

by LynnGKS

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
He was Going to be Late Home..

He had only 'booked out' til midnight, but stayed the weekend! Not that I blame him...a fun story. It did make me smile a few times....the humour is there to be enjoyed, but it is also quite erotic....thank you...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice little tale!

You've been writing Russian novels lately, and it's good to read an arousing American short story like this from time to time. You're one of the few contributors here who make the effort to put some wit in your writings. Or maybe it just comes naturally for you? Whatever the case, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oops.

I forgot to vote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Feedback

Another 'hot', superb, and erotic story from this lady.

Always enjoyable to read her stories.

AimTwoPleaseAimTwoPleaseover 11 years ago
Fuck-Me Pumps

Eroticism, humor, and a thoroughly desirable protagonist - who could ask for more? The story has a terrific buildup and effective descriptions. Please keep up the good work!

LynnGKSLynnGKSover 11 years agoAuthor
Ouch!

Russian novel! You really know how to hurt a girl.

Sid0604Sid0604over 11 years ago
Thank you

I enjoyed your story and look forward to your next. . Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

great story loved the st louis setting

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice Story

Another great story. Please keep writing.!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good story

Orwell done as always

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot story

thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Super.

Just the perfect age and also natural, just wish it was me servicing you and enjoying my favourite hobby, I just love the aroma and taste of a nice pussy.

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

Loved the story as I really appreciate a natural woman who wants to stay that way. It is also refreshing to read a story where the author understands that a muff means there is hair where it belongs. Surprisingly there are those posting here who have not figured out the difference.

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