All Comments on 'New York Adventures Ch. 01'

The story is lovely, sensual and paces along nicely with the thrill of being watched and being outrageously naughty in public. Moves along to a thrilling peak of tension with effortless precision. Made me moist thinking about it because I could almost feel the author

's foot.

Well done, writer.

Nice job again Pixie!! I can't wait for their next adventure. Very sensual and very very hot!! Keep up the great works.

Love, Con

I am in need to read more stories form a larger collection of categories.

That was a wonderful story of two girls, being completly wild, and in public, and the Hostess, wow.

Once again a great story which made me very very wet. But why aren't I one of yr fave authors??????