All Comments on 'Next Generation Christian Kingdom Ch. 08'

I <3 Your Story!!!

this is a higly erotic, kinky, sexy story that I could not stop reading one I began. However, two points could have made it better: 1) it as way too long. If the story was shorter, it would have been even more erotic; and 2) this point relates to point #1 --- drop all the hippocritical religious BS. It almost like the story was written by the many hippocrits that air their views daily on Faux News. Remember, if Jesus were alive today, he probably would be a liberal. After all, his teachings all stressed that those who are better off -- the haves -- should take care of those who are less fortunate -- the have nots. Jesus definitely would be a liberal, not a conservative.

I say this story is not long enough. I see an really good novel in this that should not stop here!!

not sure if it was more erotica or a bizarre political manifesto (you'll rarely see Jefferson or Ayn Rand quoted, I don't think, in lengthy dialogue explaining how feminism and liberalism can be 'defeated' by this utopian incest-BDSM imaginary kingdom but just wow.

The story was hot, the sprawling political dialogue two parts fascinating and freakish was not.