Nicki Submits Ch. 01

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"Stretched", he said, "your anus needs to be stretched. Call me when you're ready."

Then he was gone.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nope

Fuck that shit she needs to find a real Dom. He’s just using her, no talking about expectations, limits and no sign of a safe word, just do as I say or we’re finished, use and abuse with no aftercare. He’s a selfish prick and she deserves better.

She seems to be a Sub but he definitely isn’t a Dom. It doesn’t resemble any BDSM that I’m familiar with.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Niqab of anonymity

Isn't it great that veiled in the Niqab of our anonymity we can compare erotic fiction writers to the shamefully real Taliban! Pot, kettle, black. The sexual organs are particularly sensitive. That is why punishing them is particularly erotic. If it doesn't push your buttons, don't read it! Male subs also get it, not just females. Seems like any writer who is not a member of your club, a subscriber to your moral code or subject to the regulations of your stringent community is open to criticism. Who are the puritans? Who are the real fundamentalists? Try looking in the mirror.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great critique, "Stone the whore"

Great comment. I agree. There does seem to be a sense of total female subjugation in all the popular stories these days. Why? The difference between the Taliban and Christian Extremists is practically nil. The only difference is in most Western countries where Christianity is in power, there still exist rules of law that keep the extremists from forcing their "morality" on the "non-believers." I have no doubt that the modern day Puritans would dearly love to be permitted to stone the whores for realz. That'll get 'em believing what's right!

After all - some of the American groups that fancy themselves "Christian" (but are not) have been the forces behind the anti-gay laws in Nigeria which include whipping, lifetime imprisonment, and death. And then there's the Central Republic of Africa where "Christians" have recently ousted adherents of Islam and are now slaughtering all the Muslims they can find. Fun times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Why is it?

What is it with all this punishing of the female sex organs lately in some BDSM stories, it seems very Old Testament, Puritan or Catholic that the female sex is somehow seen as disgusting, dirty, and sinning and needs to be punished for the most miniscule infraction, all the while the sanctimonious, pure male is beyond reproach and needs to punish the unpure female, in fact it is almost a Taliban ideology that is rife in Afghanistan, keep her silent, on her knees, subserviant to the male and punished, whats next on BDSM 'stone the whore'?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
No safe word

I can understand about no safe word for a simple spanking on the bottom. After all, for hundreds of years children had no safe word when they were spanked!

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