All Comments on 'Nicole Explores'

nikster! ;) what a story, lady! leaves wayyyy too much to be imagined... if only we have illustrations to go along with it! so i'm guessing after reading this, a cold shower isn't gonna work cause of all the visuals i'm gonna get huh..

keep writing lady! *hugs*

- Reese

Nikkie A lovely read...

Short and sweet but erotic arousing.

Maybe in the next story you can describe more about who you two are, how you met and the like. You know me, I like to imagine the characters meeting, how their friendship develops

Huggles

Miranda

oh nikkie you're so fine....this story really blew my mind...hey nikkie....hey nikkie! HOT!

What did i like?? Well the whole story was fucking amazing Nicole. Enough said

FUCKING MORALS!!!!!!

Great story Nicole! Love it! You're writing is great, can't wait for the next one..

L!

xxx

A tantalizing first story. Hope it isn't your last!

Thanks everyone. Miranda, this is only to test my abilities in the erotically minded field... I'll return to you to discuss plots and stuff for the next one. :)

As for the rest, I'm just thrilled you like it, so once again, thank you!

Awesome! When will you write a story about pastry?

Wow.... so freaking hot....

Vividly delicious..

Please..more...

Nice effort for a first time

I loved the raw sexuality and obvious passion. I think it is extremely well done surpassing many I have read here from experienced writers. I highly reccommend it for "private time" prelude .

Beautiful Nikkie... An awesome description of longing and pure passion!!! Keep it going ;)

I'll be very much an avid reader

Wonderful Nikkie, first of many I hope

I sure like your style of painting a picture. Have always enjoyed your writings. Please continue to share and I for one will continue to read them.

Love the Passion in your writing Nikki

...are going to be one hell of an erotic writer. For a first submitted story (it can't be you're first ever story - it's just too damn good) that has got to be one of the most vivid portrayals of passion that I have ever read. Very, very well done.

Ok Nikki ... I came back and read it again ... even better the second time ...

I wanna be Nikki ... :)

Simply Amazing Read !! Keep writing !!

Nikkie, you know what i think of your writings :-) hugggssssssss

Love ya

Mary

I agree with Scotty Pimpin' it's an amazing story. Except the whole being you thing. That would be kind of creepy... Yeah. So yep keep writing.

WOW!!!! keep writing girl

This stuff is damn hot ! Nikkie , please have mercy next time and don't tease with those small bits called teasers ! - Nashs

I really think you outdid yourself, Nikkie. I knew you could write, but, this is awesome. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more stories, from you.

Your Friend

Miss comma

The woman behind you I mean :) Keep coming (cumming?)with more stories like this Nikkie!

oh Nikki you're so fine, you're so fine you blow my mind!

As short as this is, it is really satisfying. keep it up.

Very erotic. I like that you get right into things and yet build believable characters.

I enjoyed this Nikkie, very hot and gives me a few ideas as to you what women like.

Hope for more,

Welshie

I love your story is was well written and so sexy.

Really very nicely written with perfect timing.

Thank you taking the trouble to polish the story so well.

Closing my eyes picturing you and your lover. Very nice.

I enjoyed it Nikkie! I liked the sub/dom aspect, and there's something about being taken against a wall that does something for me. And I loved when your lover couldn't take it anymore and had an orgasm and took it out on you...oh my... ;)

Just delicious, the story just draws you in and lets you experience it all as if it was happening to you.....Yummy !

As always, you never cease to surprise me. I love you.

So sensual and passionate and yet so serene