All Comments on 'Nicoletta Ch. 02'

by jesstoyou

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savannuhsavannuhalmost 15 years ago
OMG....

Yay! So great to see an update. Your writing is superb. Really. I'm not even a fan of first person stories, but wow, you've truly weaved an engaging erotic tale. Hot and steamy doesn't begin to describe.

Please please keep up the wonderful work! I eagerly look forward to the rest. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great!

I'm not sure this story belongs in Erotic Horror so much as NonHuman category, but it's really, really good! Can't wait to see the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Can't wait to see where this is going!

naturallysweetnaturallysweetover 14 years ago
Next chapter, please :)

I look forward to seeing what happens between them next. I hope another chapter is in the works. Keep up the good work! :)

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
mysterious teasing you do

You are artfully weaving a very sexy, dark erotic tale. I was cruising at warp speed and came out for a minute. Now going on impulse engines and loving this story. I am loving Alessandro with his sexy shadow demonic self. Ummmmmmmmmmm. He is "moan worthy". Ummmmmmmmmmmhummmmmmmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
You have a true talent

Good story, as well as good writing, and so compelling!! I live for finding stories written as well as this!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Supreb!!!

Well written and amazing dialogue.

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