All Comments on 'Night Falls Ch. 05'

NightChylde why have you stopped writing, this is good, I want more. This story has the potential of really developing into a good novel.

Perhaps you might take a look at 'Do You Want to Live Forever' written by myself. If you would like to correspond, you can do so through thepeterblofly@aol.com

Peter

You cannot stop there! Your writing is extreamly good, It catches you and draws you in. I cannot wait to read more from you.

~Bunny~

KEEP WRITING!! It is beautifully written and I'm already swept into the story. Please finish!