All Comments on 'Night Fishing'

a great fucking story.I wish I could be fucked by these two

I really enjoyed this story. You caught his anticipation well.

My only comment is the way you describe the fishing gear, in as much as it uses double entendre which i do not think was intended.

Thank you

Stephen

If your wrilting is "up to scratch" you ask. It is much better than that. It is good, well written pornography and I hope you will not delay in posting the several other stories you mentioned. This one is 5 star in all respects.

Great story, especially once you hit your stride with the sex. The opening is a little bit declarative for me, but that's pretty much the pettiest complaint anyone can have with a story. You did a great job and your definitely an author I'll keep an eye out for!

To bad I can only give it 5 stars... much better than that.

Great story! Keep writing!

Very interesting story. Just watch your spelling...eg; prostate not prostrate. Other than that it was a good read.

Good sexy story, well written.

Student gobbles up his own spurted precum. Teacher licks out the hole he just creampied. Gawd damn. That nasty stuff had my cumming in my panties. Part 2 please - would love to see their relationship grow (and more dirty sex, obviously).

wow...how incredibly hot and well written. awesome first story. already eagerly awaiting your next submission.

Hot Story!!! Keep them coming!!!

You sure have my cock hard! Can't wait for part 2.

great story, well-written

It is not prostrate!

It is prostate! no R

i started reading and playing with mine. I shot so hard and long pumping it into my hand and just went crazy and took the load and put it to my lips and eat every bit. First time i have ever eaten my own cum. You did that to me and it won't be the last

this story made very randy i stripped off and jerked offmy hard cock imanaged to cum in my mouth yum great story .ps. more please.

My partner had a double serving of me for breakfast as a result of reading this. Late for work, leaking cum and trying hard to resist the urge to get in the shower with him

This so fucking hot, my brother in-law asked me to go night fishing with him now I wished I would've went with him. I would've love to take his cock in my ass & throat.

This story makes me hot every time I read it. The feelings that the narrator experiences as he is sucking cock and is being fucked remind me of the experiences I had many years ago.

Just came across this one and found it very hot. Loved it all. A bit of editing would have cured the prostate mixup.

My same age friend at 13 yrs used to get hard while fishing in a farm creek. We would take our dicks out and look at each other. We would touch each other and I finally put his in my mouth. I got him to cum but he wouldn't suck me. Aftrer I sucked him he would jack me off. Once we were in the barn and I fucked him btween the legs. He would do almost any thing but he wouldn't put a cock in his mouth.

I would love a fishing trip like this one. I would let him fuck me all night long.

You want lips write about pussy. That kept taking me out if the story.

If you want to make a comment at least make ian educated one.

The author is correct in his usage of the term "lips".

https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/lip

Hot story, I gave it 5 stars.