All Comments on 'Night Job Ch. 02'

by bluemono

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 12 years ago
Hmm

Strange story but i really find that I like it, looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
please write more

I am really enjoying this story. Please continue to write and share more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it so far

It would be great if you could make the chapters a little longer.

5 stars

amansmindamansmindalmost 12 years ago
A new angle

Somehow you have found a new angle to an old story. I hope to see more stories from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I like this--except for the part where "he" says,

"Your muscles are very sensitive down here - don't touch yourself here. I'll know if you do."

I will. Be assured.

But maybe I should rebel by NOT touching--?

That would be crazy. However,

who's to know?

As God is my witness I will not touch myself there. I will obey.

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