All Comments on 'Night Moves'

by Ellafun

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PennLadyPennLadyover 12 years ago
Good until the end

Can't figure out why she'd want anything to do with Anthony again. Otherwise, well done.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Lovely tale.

Thank you.

YoursSINSerelyYoursSINSerelyover 12 years ago
Good Writing

Very easy to read, and I totally got it. ;)

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Really Good Story

A lovely night out. A few quibbles will follow via "Send Feedback".

EllafunEllafunover 12 years agoAuthor
Answer to the Query:

To those of you who have asked: The truck in question had an after-market moon-roof installed on it, that could be "propped" open from the inside of the cab. Thanks for paying attention!!! ella

bookworm69bookworm69over 11 years ago
beautiful story.

love the passion, details and descriptions. esp. the final act. very, very hot. let's see more.

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