by Prestige
Be nice, all you raters/commenters of this piece. T'was my first "erotic" piece - and I do see some errors and things that need correcting. Well, perhaps I'm just being overcritical. What do you think?
This was a great story! It flowed well and was polished. Super hot too! keep writing! Thanks!
Everytime I come here I find a really GOOD story I've somehow managed to miss! Glad this one caught my eye finally. Very well written and very erotic as well. A very good passionate read. It helps that my God is also Cernunnos. =^_^= PK