by Lady_Blackhawk
I can't wait for more of this story!!!!!! So happy for the update!
I love this story . I hope Sam's not starting to like the bad guy. and hopes night wolf finds them before they make it to camp.
its great to hear from this story again!!
thanks for updating and please try to do so again soon. It's very unsual to find a story with native amercan indians as characters...I love the development of the characters and their relationships in this story.
Could it be that Black Sun is developing feelings for his captive and she for him? If Black Sun's ravishment of Samantha has gone on for over a fortnight, chances are she be pregnant by now, the classic symptoms (i.e. morning sickness, tender breasts) soon to present themselves at this point in time a few days from now. Should it come to that, perhaps bearing a daughter, an agreement could be arranged promising the half-blooded child to Sky-Eyes' own half-blooded son, since none of the purer members of any of the tribes are likely to have anything to do with such children. Looking forward to the rest! Thanks.
I think Black Sun is starting to feel something for his captive. Of course he isn't exactly a "root-worthy" character right now, but you never know what could happen.
Really hope this story continues I love it!
please finish your story, id love to find out wat happens to ione/falling water n samantha... not to mention tessa/star n the rest of your characters... please finish...
Absolutely love it!! Please....please finish! I want to know what happens next :)
WOW! I just stumbled upon this story and I LOVE it!! Wonderfully written, very detailed and enthralling. Please continue writing, I feel invested in these characters and want to know what happens next...
If you have time, please continue writing this story ^0^
I can see that you have done your research through the details you have incorporated making it realistic enough for the reader. Plus, you have written it so wonderfully well that it wasn't hard for me to grasp the setting of your story. You have developed and described your characters well also. But what I loved the most is that Night Wolf 'waited' for her and 'saved' himself for her <---it is usually the female characters doing this.
I really enjoyed reading all ten chapters in one sitting and I want to know more :)
i think this is beautifully written. my only problem with it is when you use non english words there should be an english translation directly after before the story continues, even if it is a repeat. other than that i think it was awesome.
great story so far, it's a shame it wasn't finished tho. looks like its been 2 years since its been updated so I won't expect more to come sadly.
You need to finish this story my heart softens alittle for Black Sun although I still like Night Wolf better he reminds me so much of my own partner...
You need to finish this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is an incredible story but frustrating that it was left as is. Wish it could have been finished
But where is your conclusion? Seven years later, we still don"t know what happened with the three young women and their men. Are you still alive and well? Please complete the story, if you can.
This is a great series. I really want to know what happens when Night Wolf gets to them.
8 years and the story is not finished. Wish I read the comments before starting it.
Can nobody on here finish a story, or are they all so stupid to think nobody will notice.