All Comments on 'Nine Times Out of Ten'

Very well done. Loved the last line, its a real clincher. I enjoyed the same things that you wrote about, very very well done.

Bravo...

You've definitely got the balance right between control (who's controlling whom?) and affection. That was subtle and non-gratuitous. It's tough to find on here sometimes, so commendations and all. The last line's put a smile on my face that I'll not be able to explain to my friends. Cheers

I read the whole thing with a wicked sense of anticipation. Until the last line...and I smiled...relieved and satisfied. Very nice.

I really enjoyed it. Top notch job