All Comments on 'No Bruises'

I guess I mean tale. Short but hot, thanks for sharing it.

liked your short story .. good one .. i think to begin with .. you can build on this one .. best luck .. thank you!!

That's something to get hard over?

I was going to stop reading when you said she bent at the waste instead of waist, but I had to see where this train wreck was going, and I found it was nowhere. What a waste.

I stopped reading at the line "a bubbling mixture of blood and semen oozed from her..." That's not erotic as far as I'm concerned. You write well, but that line really turned me off.

what was the point to this it for sure is NOT a story. No one just drops a story like that. Hell who was she even fucking with? If this is Your best give up on writing.

this sick piece of crap beongs in the bdsm area not here please stop writing until you learn where to put your shitty stories

what the fuck is wrong with you?

why the hell would you put something about webbed feet? That should have been left out...fucking gross. I only gave this one star because negative stars are not an option.

I notice you have 49,000+ views and NO FAVORITES...imagine that. It's because of the nasty ass freak ending.