All Comments on 'No More Rain in This Cloud'

So his genetic legacy is history ... But he liv s his bastard cuckolds kids ?

Fuck this wimpy shit story

Sorry, but over the course of a lifetime he had to have learned to stand up for himself. This is the story of a weak willed pussy who deserved what she did to him.

"You pushed me to him! If you weren't a jellyfish, if you were a man and stood up to me I never would have gone to him!"

This is exactly right. Any man or woman who can't stand up for themselves after 17 years of an abusive marriage are tacitly agreeing g to abuse and deserve no sympathy. Especially this fucking loser in the story. No one should feel sorry for him. He chose that life.

Also to the foolish anonymous commenter from 8 months ago. Ate you so smooth brained that you don't know the difference between axoption and decades of deceit? Get your hedf pit of your ass! And stop expecting other right minded men to believe you shit doesn't stink. Fucking moron.

One important lesson to be learned here, never ever allow your spouse to run rough shod over you as it will only lead to disaster. In this case he was turned into a cuckold until he heard the church women talk which led him to do the DNA tests. He was just a weak pathetic person. Then to top it all off he takes the children of another man which would be a constant reminder of him being cuckold and runs away.

Just pathetic.

Huh? He planned trip to country. Took money. She disappeared without money?

Damn

Worst kind of cheating cunt. Fuck her and her asshole lover. You know why they disappeared? Because they were killed. A fitting end. In fiction anyway.

One of the reasons Scorpio is in my favorite authors.

Fairly dumb story, I even figured out the "Don" in Donna right off the bat. but for the low IQ'ed this would pass as something better than bad. TO each their own.

But this hit all the wrong buttons.

Just to counter what he’s a weasel said, I thought it was a pretty good story. I won’t insult the lit readers like the weasel did, I’ll just say I enjoyed it. Thanks, Scorpio

Would like to have seen her and Don suffer for their evil deeds. No way in the real world he gets away w/ the kids, but that is why we read this stories, to see the imagination work!

I liked the story but I do not believe her boyfriend would of kept the secret from such a wimp of a husband

If he was that much a "jellyfish", he would've probably been humiliated by Don years before; perhaps thing would've changed. No writing as to any discussions between him & the kids after the church function. Both should've been made to suffer more, especially his wife. She called him a jellyfish, but she should've known him being wimpish before marrying him. Nice story well written. 4* -- Bob

It's one thing to be slow on the uptake but damn!

There were no DNA tests in 1989. And there were no mobile phones... Paternal kidnaping though was a thing... In addition to the unwarranted anachronisms, the "story" was pathetic ...

Nice tear jerking story, if you’re that way inclined….. I find some stories on here have missed the point, it’s called Literotica where is the sex?

I don't liked the story. Moreover, I hate this type of character who is afraid of confronting specially when he has the proof. Flying away from problems is never be a solution. If he was a man enough then he'd have kicked out the bitch and took necessary action against the SOB.

Well... the writing was so stilted and dry it read like a 7 y.o. wrote it... find another hobby.

⭐ Wow, what a crock of shit.

As if a bitch like Sarah would let him finish his speech so neatly. She would be screaming louder than any microphone the second he raised that subject.

Realism, people!

Pos. However , the mc described is increasingly common. In the same way so many cucks and their narcisstic and sadistic wives try to pass them off as alphas. Yeah right.

Fifty percent my ass!

At least 90 percent!

Wimpy cuckold finally got balls to too late. Live in foreign country because the MC has no guts. Taught your kids well! When going gets rough run the other way out

He ran away like a baby. How is this standing up for himself? Biggest wimp on thisnsite

I pity this type of people. Can't accept the reality. I personally know some of them.

They make my skin crawl. Pathetic people just pure and simply pathetic.

Like that the author can elicit such angst from the commentators below,screwed by wife ,stay and get screwed by the courts,leave and have a life,in another country and have some pride.5stars.Dalbydad

First I know this is fiction, BUT let's just say it was real. There are many Men who don't make a big deal over the bullshit some women throw at them. Easier to keep the peace. Fact, NO man with 3 kids come out in a divorce in this country. It doesn't matter who donated the sperm. He is going to to get royally screwed. The only way is exactly what this MC did. Haul Ass, Take everything. Screw this countries crooked court systems.

This was great up until the last three paragraphs. The epilogue doesn't quite fit the story.

The story was ok. The remarks below, especially those by Chimo1961 were bullshit! I stopped submitting stories to this site a couple of years ago because of exactly the kind of brain dead reactionary fools as this.

The story is far better than it's score

Very nice, sentimental story of Femdom agitprop victim finally taking charge. The worm turns.

This is why I'm an atheist. Religion is just a cult for power, money and perverts.

Please stop writing shit like this, if you honestly think this is how men would act in any marriage, you are either a bull dyke or you need to come out of the closet⭐️

The ending raised it from 1 star to 2 stars

As many MCs say in these stories their face next to wimpy cuckold

The woim toins. Well done.

Not bad. In a larger sense, a lot of marriages are like this. They just don't end up like this. 4 stars, the Bear lied it

The BEAR.

In a proper society, the congregation would grab the adulterers, take them outside, and put them to death right then and there!

ZK

Good idea but unsatisfactory implementation of the idea.

Weak. And a relatively small point, but what did the asshole Don do that would get him disbarred? I understand that lawyers can be low life scum but fucking someone else's wife won't get them disbarred.

Really? He tolerates her giving him sex once a year on his birthday? All three kids are someone else's? And commenters think this is common? Balderdash.

Thanks for a wel-written and thoroughly enjoyable tale! Excellent job!

They weren't doing DNA testing for john q public in 1989 but que sera sera.

I enjoyed that tale of heartbreak and renewal but don't understand how he put up with her nonsense for years.

A pretty weak story. Hey, how did he get and confirm Don's DNA? Yes, he was way too weak and he let her walk all over him. The extent is unrealistic. The ending was weak too. Three stars, even overlooking the impossibility of disbarring an attorney for screwing a non client, especially when the evidence is all hearsay with the complainer in another country.

JPB NOT BOB

What a shit-show. I can’t fathom people acting that selfishly. Maybe I’m naive.

The only painful part of the story to read, was the total wimp doormat he was for so long. After he saw an out, he seemed to grow a pair. Overall a good story. 4 stars.