All Comments on 'No More Rain in This Cloud'

The only painful part of the story to read, was the total wimp doormat he was for so long. After he saw an out, he seemed to grow a pair. Overall a good story. 4 stars.

What a shit-show. I can’t fathom people acting that selfishly. Maybe I’m naive.

A pretty weak story. Hey, how did he get and confirm Don's DNA? Yes, he was way too weak and he let her walk all over him. The extent is unrealistic. The ending was weak too. Three stars, even overlooking the impossibility of disbarring an attorney for screwing a non client, especially when the evidence is all hearsay with the complainer in another country.

JPB NOT BOB

I enjoyed that tale of heartbreak and renewal but don't understand how he put up with her nonsense for years.

They weren't doing DNA testing for john q public in 1989 but que sera sera.

Thanks for a wel-written and thoroughly enjoyable tale! Excellent job!

Really? He tolerates her giving him sex once a year on his birthday? All three kids are someone else's? And commenters think this is common? Balderdash.

Weak. And a relatively small point, but what did the asshole Don do that would get him disbarred? I understand that lawyers can be low life scum but fucking someone else's wife won't get them disbarred.

Good idea but unsatisfactory implementation of the idea.

In a proper society, the congregation would grab the adulterers, take them outside, and put them to death right then and there!

ZK

Not bad. In a larger sense, a lot of marriages are like this. They just don't end up like this. 4 stars, the Bear lied it

The BEAR.

The woim toins. Well done.

The ending raised it from 1 star to 2 stars

As many MCs say in these stories their face next to wimpy cuckold

Please stop writing shit like this, if you honestly think this is how men would act in any marriage, you are either a bull dyke or you need to come out of the closet⭐️

This is why I'm an atheist. Religion is just a cult for power, money and perverts.

Very nice, sentimental story of Femdom agitprop victim finally taking charge. The worm turns.

The story is far better than it's score

The story was ok. The remarks below, especially those by Chimo1961 were bullshit! I stopped submitting stories to this site a couple of years ago because of exactly the kind of brain dead reactionary fools as this.

This was great up until the last three paragraphs. The epilogue doesn't quite fit the story.

First I know this is fiction, BUT let's just say it was real. There are many Men who don't make a big deal over the bullshit some women throw at them. Easier to keep the peace. Fact, NO man with 3 kids come out in a divorce in this country. It doesn't matter who donated the sperm. He is going to to get royally screwed. The only way is exactly what this MC did. Haul Ass, Take everything. Screw this countries crooked court systems.

Like that the author can elicit such angst from the commentators below,screwed by wife ,stay and get screwed by the courts,leave and have a life,in another country and have some pride.5stars.Dalbydad

I pity this type of people. Can't accept the reality. I personally know some of them.

They make my skin crawl. Pathetic people just pure and simply pathetic.

He ran away like a baby. How is this standing up for himself? Biggest wimp on thisnsite

Fifty percent my ass!

At least 90 percent!

Wimpy cuckold finally got balls to too late. Live in foreign country because the MC has no guts. Taught your kids well! When going gets rough run the other way out

Pos. However , the mc described is increasingly common. In the same way so many cucks and their narcisstic and sadistic wives try to pass them off as alphas. Yeah right.

As if a bitch like Sarah would let him finish his speech so neatly. She would be screaming louder than any microphone the second he raised that subject.

Realism, people!

⭐ Wow, what a crock of shit.

Well... the writing was so stilted and dry it read like a 7 y.o. wrote it... find another hobby.

I don't liked the story. Moreover, I hate this type of character who is afraid of confronting specially when he has the proof. Flying away from problems is never be a solution. If he was a man enough then he'd have kicked out the bitch and took necessary action against the SOB.

Nice tear jerking story, if you’re that way inclined….. I find some stories on here have missed the point, it’s called Literotica where is the sex?

There were no DNA tests in 1989. And there were no mobile phones... Paternal kidnaping though was a thing... In addition to the unwarranted anachronisms, the "story" was pathetic ...

It's one thing to be slow on the uptake but damn!

If he was that much a "jellyfish", he would've probably been humiliated by Don years before; perhaps thing would've changed. No writing as to any discussions between him & the kids after the church function. Both should've been made to suffer more, especially his wife. She called him a jellyfish, but she should've known him being wimpish before marrying him. Nice story well written. 4* -- Bob

I liked the story but I do not believe her boyfriend would of kept the secret from such a wimp of a husband

Would like to have seen her and Don suffer for their evil deeds. No way in the real world he gets away w/ the kids, but that is why we read this stories, to see the imagination work!

Just to counter what he’s a weasel said, I thought it was a pretty good story. I won’t insult the lit readers like the weasel did, I’ll just say I enjoyed it. Thanks, Scorpio

Fairly dumb story, I even figured out the "Don" in Donna right off the bat. but for the low IQ'ed this would pass as something better than bad. TO each their own.

But this hit all the wrong buttons.

One of the reasons Scorpio is in my favorite authors.

Damn

Worst kind of cheating cunt. Fuck her and her asshole lover. You know why they disappeared? Because they were killed. A fitting end. In fiction anyway.

Huh? He planned trip to country. Took money. She disappeared without money?

One important lesson to be learned here, never ever allow your spouse to run rough shod over you as it will only lead to disaster. In this case he was turned into a cuckold until he heard the church women talk which led him to do the DNA tests. He was just a weak pathetic person. Then to top it all off he takes the children of another man which would be a constant reminder of him being cuckold and runs away.

Just pathetic.

"You pushed me to him! If you weren't a jellyfish, if you were a man and stood up to me I never would have gone to him!"

This is exactly right. Any man or woman who can't stand up for themselves after 17 years of an abusive marriage are tacitly agreeing g to abuse and deserve no sympathy. Especially this fucking loser in the story. No one should feel sorry for him. He chose that life.

Also to the foolish anonymous commenter from 8 months ago. Ate you so smooth brained that you don't know the difference between axoption and decades of deceit? Get your hedf pit of your ass! And stop expecting other right minded men to believe you shit doesn't stink. Fucking moron.

Sorry, but over the course of a lifetime he had to have learned to stand up for himself. This is the story of a weak willed pussy who deserved what she did to him.

So his genetic legacy is history ... But he liv s his bastard cuckolds kids ?

Fuck this wimpy shit story

My mom's uncle went through this twice. The first wife was a chain smoker, died of cancer. Left him with daughter from her sex buddy. Second one he left because she lied saying he was dad after gang bang he didn't participate in. He stayed until girl was 13, then took her with him. Raised her. Sent her to college. For those who just cant' raise another man's child, you are either stupid or heartless. If you don't know, then they are your's. I have 5 daughters, my wife couldn't bear children. All my girls are adopted and they are more my daughters than almost all biologicals I know.

I loved this story except we don't know what happened to the cheaters. The way it was left they went on to live together and were probably happy. Why did they never try to find the kids? Would have preferred to hear how their reputation followed them and how that affected their lives. Also seems strange that she remained with him for so long. She couldn't have been happy either. Why not just seek a divorce and move on?

Some people are commenting on raising another man's child. The issue is not the injustice caused by the biological father, but the need of the child. He has formed an attachment to them and raises them as a personal commitment. That gives him the joy of being a good and loved father. Then he takes justice on the cheating wife. It worked for me. He is a man of depth and character.

Why do assholes try to hurt children

The guy was a pussy

I just don't see raising another mans kids. Wrong or not, I wouldn't even attempt it.

Sarah had gotten word to Frank that she was dieing and she wished to see me and her children for one last time.

The children, their families and I made the trip back to the States to see her for one last time.

She then told us about her life after we had left. She had been alone for 30 odd years after Don was severely beaten behind a bar one night. The beating was so viscious that he never recovered the ability to speak, walk or care for himself. He passed away 2 years after the beating.

She told us how she had reflected on her life when she was diagnosed with cancer 2 years before and realised the hurt she had caused to people she should have loved. She decided to not seek treatment for the cancer as some form of penance.

We then told her about our lives in our new country. About how happy we all were there. How well we had all done in our new home. How their children her grandchildren were acting native and were really enjoying growing up there. Were we being mean? No not really even though it seemed to come across that way. She had tears in her eyes as we related our lives there and she said she had missed so much.

She then called the kids by their birth names. She got really upset when they all told her they had changed their names as they did not want the constant reminder of who she was and what she had done. She had tears in her eyes as she thought about the amount of damage she had done.

She asked us all to forgive her so she could pass in peace.

It was Nicole that started it off. She said "NO WAY mother you were a selfish nasty bitch to one of the kindest nicest men there was."She then said that she hoped she rotted in hell.

Nancy said something similar.

Joshua said that he could never remember her being anything but mean and nasty to his father. And he was disgusted when he saw her and Don going at it and saying hurtful things about his father.

I asked the kids to please give me a few minutes with her alone. I told her that I had forgiven her years ago as bearing the hate was doing me no good so with the help of a priest I worked through the hurt and the hate. I also thanked her because if it wasn't for her I would not have had the wonderful life I had with the 3 wonderful children. I said I hoped she rested in peace and I would attend her funeral when it came up.

I convinced the kids to introduce the grandchildren and spouses to her by explaining that it would really upset her when she realised how much she had missed. She seemed really sad when the introductions were made.

She passed 2 days later and yes we all went to the funeral. There were not many people there. Apart from family only 6 other people showed up. She was known as a very nasty woman who never had a kind word to say about anyone. She was buried beside her Don and I had a nice headstone placed on her grave. I may have hated her for what she did but her life did deserve recognition. As I said my hatred had passed.

I have been back only once to visit her grave. The kids have never seen the headstone.

dull, I'd have take the daughters and left the son, after all they all knew for years and chose their mother - i'd have made the girls my sex slaves

Again. His revenge was not nearly enough, but overall not a bad story.

No one should do anything like that to children.

Life's a bitch and then you marry one

-The concept of taking the moral high ground no matter what the cost is disgusting to me.-

Here here.

the thought that he still raised someone’s children at the expense of not having his children is appalling. and i agree with [valliant] adultery is not grounds for disbarment. He wasn’t even compensated for raising bastard children, at least he could sue the father for back child support.

The concept of taking the moral high ground no matter what the cost is disgusting to me.

He got what he deserved

If you don't stand up for yourself who will?

His speech in the church was spot on! That is worth remembering. That father was grounded and he should not be required to hold his wife to her vows. She should have done that. Her cheating wasn't his fault. He was just too good for her.

I liked it a lot! 5*****

...thank you for the info...

Loklie

A husband is legally the father of any children born into his marriage, whether or not they're genetically his. Unless and until there's a legal ruling terminating parental rights (which isn't something that would automatically just happen because of them being affair babies) or limiting them in the case of a custody dispute, each parent has the complete right to take the kids and go anywhere with them.

An attorney getting disbarred because he had an affair is fantasy-land bullshit. If an attorney is having sex with a client, that's a ticket to disbarment (though even there, a lot of states have exceptions if the sexual relationship started before the legal one), but just having an affair isn't going to get you punished, absent a situation where the sex is criminal in nature (e.g., a military context where the adultery leads to him being charged with the violation of military rules, or the affair is with his underaged step-daughter, are two instances where attorneys have been disbarred).

Like a lot of LW bullshit, the "attorneys get disbarred for adultery" thing was true at one point, but that point was pre-WWII.

...a couple questions I have are, could he take the kids when they aren't biologically his? Also, can a lawyer be disbarred for having an affair? Would be interested to hear what became of the cheaters. She surely deserved more retribution. I gave it 4 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

He was a pushover=predictable outcome.

Glad he found some backbone.

Could have been really good. Betrayal of that dimension demands punishment of much more epic proportions.

The bitch was right he is a non confrontational pussy what reak woman would have children with a wimp pussy that does not wsnt to rock the boat. Wimps that let a woman make them out a bitch boy deserves to be cheated on.

A good plot but a lot of loose ends. What was the protagonist's name? How could he take the children and leave the country, when the kids were not even his? Kidnapping? Did Don and Sarah leave together and then stay together? What was the nature of the work he did? - at first and then when he was forced by Sarah to change? The author truly painted him as a total wimp, with NO backbone.How could anyone take the shit Sarah dished out and call himself a man? He couldn't even look at the DNA report when it arrived.Non confrontationalist?! He was worse than a wet paper bag. 3*s.

till he got an umbrella and moved, TK U MLJ LV NV

The Bitch wife was right about one thing. If he had stood up to her, shut her dumb ass down when she started pushing him around, things may have turned out differently. But he “hated confrontation”, so he backed down, let her have her way until she thought she was King. And she acted like it. I won’t say the guy deserved what he got, but he sure as hell should have stood up to her, and a lot sooner than he finally did. I didn’t like the story much, I don’t like it when lying conniving bitches get away scot-free, and that’s basically what she did. Yeah, she lost her kids, but how much did she really care about them anyway. One Star.

You put a man through the worst case scenario and not even in this situation are are able to write a satisfying BTB story. Mild, like you.

Where did he move to and his wife got off toolightly

Decent little tale. If the timeframe had been a bit shorter and there was something other than the blasé (felt like it should have been an audio version read by Ben Stein) it would have been far better.

The wife was just plain evil.

I hope he found a better woman in that other country and had at least one child of his own. I get that he loves these kids as well he should but she stole his genetic legacy from him and unless he has another child, she wins. He should also hire a PI to track them down. Don deserves some physical revenge for what he did. Sarah would then be totally alone and maybe someday would regret what she did.

I liked this story, only because I can see the reality in it. I know from personal experience of the abuse husbands go through in the court system in this country. Husbands desperate for love from their wives will take a lot of shit, and they know it, even if it is fake. That is a reality you can bank on. Don't misunderstand me, some men can be just as bad, but if they go to court they get screwed, and they know it. When you throw kids in the mix, it changes a lot of things. Things that some commenters know nothing about. Good story, and I agree with the other commenter, I would certainly want my pound of flesh, one way or another.

Seems like way too many years to accept her abuse. But it seemed odd that he would run away, leave his parents and all their friends because his wife was a cheating cunt. If he is going to grow a pair, at least stick around and step on her and Don. Running away seemed like the cowardly thing to do - again.

I think, or rather I know, had this been me in that situation, a little more "retribution" would have been mandatory. Yeah, I guarantee you. before I took "my" kids and left the country, good old Don would have had a close personal relationship with a Louisville Slugger.

In some places in the us especially the smaller towns the church is the center of their world. So if she is pitted to the church and congregation she is effectively blacklisted from the town. She won't be able to go anywhere or do anything because of this.

wonder if she told him that were getting married, expecting him to obey too

At one time I had a profile. Went out created an email account solely for Literotica comments, never used it again. Eventually yahoo deleated account. Even with profile, I often jusr read story and left anon comment. I suspect most people have separate account for their profile.

I have read numerous comments deriding anonymous comments not having courage to identify themselves. Have noticed few of profiles indicate actual identifying names.

Lordslammdawg is one I doubt anyone at Social Security has record of existence.

When some profiled commenter bashes anons just because of lack of id I go to that profile. Other than gender, usually little info can be gleaned. The named community like to assert some special link to each other-a false bond of fictitious names

True some anon comments are vulgar and snide. But same can be said about ''named'' comments. Is there any difference calling anon any idiot or lordslammdawg one just because I supplies an identifier.

Does one feel any more righteous or satisfied calling out an anon as opposed to railing about mr whatisaslamdoganyway

This was different from much of your other writings. More what I liked in a story. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Thanks!

I would have demanded past child support for three illegitimate children from Don Roberts to be used for college expenses. I feel like this is a stand alone story, but I would have enjoyed one additional paragraph to find out what the future held for the now-childless Sarah and the scum bucket Don. Surely his wife divorced him. I actually could care less if the two cheaters had a life together.

I hate cheating cunts. And their asshole lovers. Hopefully they all suffer in pain.

Sure he was decent enough to continue to care for the kids he didn't sir, but it's sad.

The jerk Don's DNA carries on and the nice guy's doesn't. It's like the mixed emotions I get from a woman not getting an abortion after being raped. It can't ever feel good to stop a potential life, but do rapists deserve to spread their seed? What if rape, or more accurately, the capacity to rape has a genetic component?

This story is an object lesson, marriage is a partnership not a dictatorship. If one spouse wants a dictatorship then there simply is no marriage. Always get a prenup and leave before the pain becomes too much to bear.

your mouth and your attitude sucks a big wet dirty cock and you love it! gave it a 5

Be fair? WTF does that mean? What's with the statistics on cheating? So what? Are you trying to justify cheating by saying that it is "normal"? Here is the bottom line, cheating, lying, deceiving are common in this world. Are they the norm? I don't think so because they are not acceptable to anyone even those that commit them. Cheaters live in fear of being cheated on, because they know that it could happen and how much it would hurt if it did happen to them. Yet, they cheat and inflict pain anyway. That is not "fair", that is the definition of an unredeemable piece of shit.

Point One: Affairs affect one of every 2.7 couples, according to counselor Janis Abrahms Spring, author of After the Affair,as reported by the Washington Post on March 30, 1999. Ten percent of extramarital affairs last one day, 10 percent last more than one day but less than a month, 50 percent last more than a month but less than a year, but 40 percent last two or more years. Few extramarital affairs last more than four years.

Point Two: Conservative infidelity statistics estimate that “60 percent of men and 40 percent of women will have an extramarital affair. These figures are even more significant when we consider the total number of marriages involved, since it's unlikely that all the men and women having affairs happen to be married to each other. If even half of the women having affairs (or 20 percent) are married to men not included in the 60 percent having affairs, then at least one partner will have an affair in approximately 80 percent of all marriages. With this many marriages affected, it's unreasonable to think affairs are due only to the failures and shortcomings of individual husbands or wives."

And Point Three: Note that the above adultery statistics of the prevalence of affairs were made more than a decade ago; so based on changes in society during the intervening years, the current percentage of the population who have had affairs is probably somewhat HIGHER. For instance, the continuing increase of women in the workplace and the increase of women having affairs on the Internet means that the numbers for women having affairs is probably similar to those for men—about 60%.

don't be surprised when he finally bites back. TK U MLJ LV NV

And a cheating, worthless whore to boot, but she was right about one thing. Hubby was a jellyfish, that allowed 17 years of abuse. It was doubtful that he could have ever sired children, as that requires a pair of testicles! When you lay on the ground before everyone, don't be surprised when they use you as a doormat!

Too bad we didn't learn what happened to the wife after it, I would like to read it even if nothing really bad happened to her, just for to know.

what can one say . ..

it is what it is.

life for many , truly is shit.

latest statistics:

Percentage of women who say they would have an affair if they knew they would never get caught 68%

Percentage of women who admit to committing infidelity in any relationship they’ve had 54%

Average length of an affair 2 years

Percent of children who are the product of infidelity 3%

So really, this is not an unusual story at all, just she choose to have all the kids from her lover.

Ahhh loving wives.

And I think we'd have 100% general consensus in that Sarah and what she did to this man was the epitome of evil.

A marriage is anything but what this author described in this terrible story. Although written expertly, no author could put life into this corpse. This story was DOA. There was nothing to redeem. A divorce seemed unnecessary and superfluous in view of the surrounding circumstances and total lack of commitment. The husband was beyond pathetic and totally wimpy. The wife was a faithless scumbag. The children were tortured beings of a spineless whore. There was no revenge or retribution on good old Don and his slut. I have read other stories written by this author, which were great. Thank you for your effort!

Thanks for the offering.

Something like he gives her AIDS and they both die in agony and with no one about them to comfort them or show love.

The author writes technically well. Nothing stood out too badly.

However, he like a Japanes calligrapher with a mop. All simple bold black and white lines. The man is contemptible, always 'doing the right thing' and never defending himself.

The wife suddenly woke up on her wedding day and said "Oh...I am going to treat my husband like shit and fuck ONE guy for the rest of my life, never feeling remorse and gleefully making myself into the biggest whore in the county.'

Just...suddenly. So I felt depressed reading the story, despite the three line 'happy ending' at the back. He sucked, she sucked, the kids sucked, the church sucked.

What was there to like? I don't think Saxon always writes like this. I just didn't like this one much.

Ironically, the BtB crowd has been the primary action force in reducing stories like this one and making the cuck fantasies they purport to hate the main output of the LW category. Talk about mixed victory.

Monkcalm is a fucking idiot! This site draws them like flies to shit.

When the husband grew balls they should have been bigger. Should have really punished the whore and her asshole lover. Extreme pain for both would have been nice. As for monkass, you're a dick. HA