by LingerieRobot
I wish you had not rewarded Kayleigh with such a speedy resolution and incredible sex. It would have been better to have her hook up with Dick and become an addict. Street whore sucking alien cock for a hit of ruby. Show people what happens to despicable whores like her.
Seriously, morality mustn’t be abandoned. Only anarchy results and it ruins a story.
Disappointing in your choices for results, and disappointing that it just stops. Well written, but ultimately frustrating.