All Comments on 'Not Alone Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I wish you had not rewarded Kayleigh with such a speedy resolution and incredible sex. It would have been better to have her hook up with Dick and become an addict. Street whore sucking alien cock for a hit of ruby. Show people what happens to despicable whores like her.

Seriously, morality mustn’t be abandoned. Only anarchy results and it ruins a story.

shadrachtshadracht17 days ago

Disappointing in your choices for results, and disappointing that it just stops. Well written, but ultimately frustrating.

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