by Sebastian32
and well written. Reminds me of my first time as a 21 year old with a prostitute.
Wow, that was a great story! I loved the descriptive way that you right. I could almost hear you two having sex...
But the almost clinical aspect of your writing seemed just right. Well done, a well-written story.
I liked it a lot. You write well. Love the premise and your descriptions.
Thank you so much, everybody. I'm writing the second part. Will post soon. Ta!
Great story but in the beginning it felt as if I was on prozac again reading the intro really fast. Maybe some more semicolons or something.
All in all a great read