All Comments on 'Not From The Beginning'

by Sebastian32

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good story-

and well written. Reminds me of my first time as a 21 year old with a prostitute.

Naughty_MistyNaughty_Mistyover 13 years ago
Awesome

Wow, that was a great story! I loved the descriptive way that you right. I could almost hear you two having sex...

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
I've never been with a prostitute

But the almost clinical aspect of your writing seemed just right. Well done, a well-written story.

birthday_girlbirthday_girlover 13 years ago
Sexy

I liked it a lot. You write well. Love the premise and your descriptions.

Sebastian32Sebastian32over 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you so much, everybody. I'm writing the second part. Will post soon. Ta!

Kitkat103Kitkat103over 13 years ago
Five Stars

Great story but in the beginning it felt as if I was on prozac again reading the intro really fast. Maybe some more semicolons or something.

All in all a great read

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