All Comments on 'Not My Fault Ch. 03'

by Myxy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well it's SOMEBODIES fault.

Just plain bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Started out not bring your fault but now you went from man to full out puss. If you still have your balls then man up

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The previous two comments

Are from ignorant idiots, disregard what they've said as it is pointless rubbish. Please continue on with the story it is very hot and I love the way it is progressing

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awful

Oh god are you for real!!!!!!

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 9 years ago
Fun!

It's actually both fun and hot, which is pretty hard to do. Coming in front of your sister is pretty steamy, but doing it so she won't discover that you have already come is pretty ironic. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, regardless of what anonymous naysayers say, there must be plenty of readers who like what you've written, just look at your score!

agamottoagamottoabout 9 years ago
Very well done,

I loved it so far, and I hope that you plan to continue the story. I DO feel sorry for Paul though, his sister is going to KILL him now that she know about the date!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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Crazy, fast and hot. This definitely needs to be continued.

Disregard those negative dumbasses, though I wonder what they are doing in the trans section if they don't like that :P I've given you 3x5 stars and if you want that to be 4, you gotta write more.

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle11 months ago

Love the story. Sometimes you need something to happen to realize who you really are. I hope you finish the journey

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