All Comments on 'Not So Boring Math Class'

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abc101abc101about 13 years ago
too compressed

it was a good sort story but it would have been better if the story was not so short and compressed. You need to drag it out and build up suspense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Where is the exhibitionism or voyeurism?

The story has the potential to be very good, however no one actually saw them doing it. I also think there should have been more suspense

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