All Comments on 'Not That Kind of Girl'

If reading that got me this hard I must be a male slut for cock. I could SEE you sliding that nice hard cock of yours into his ass, using it like a tight pussy, wishing it were me you taking. I slid a nice long thick dildo into my ass pussy as you fucked him, pretending it was me. VERY well written by a true dominatrix who likes to take and make subs out of guys like me. I normally like being on top, but you made me wonder. dale at oldvintner@msn.com

Wow, that was realistic, and scary. I hope it was just a fantasy, and doesn't come from personal experience. I didn't find it sexy, but it was well written, in a procedural kind of way.

You visit some dark places, my friend.

well written and erotic...thanks...

...This guy is awful because she/he convinced the poor dolt that she wanted rough sex and he complied, so BANG goes the tranq... Yep he sure deserved that! Oh, and its important to note she/he's no Dom, just your average everyday rapist. <sigh> Turnabout?? Needs a few more tags - start with "rape". And as far as what the police would do to find her... you wouldn't believe how easy it is, obviously. How is this "story" a positive influenence for... anything? Oh goodie, just wot we need more of here. The male in the story is an idiot, the TG in the story either won't admit she's TG, or can't for some other reason. Unfortunately, since there is NO background anywhere for her, all we can do is feel sorry for her. It feels like you are trying to make just the fact that she is a pre-op TG some kind of horror movie scenario. Do I hate this story...? The scoring system really needs a -1 star for stories like this.

That is a truly disgusting fetish to have.

People will say this story isn't exactly good because of the "rape" scenario that goes on, but it's well written erotica.

Wonderful in my eyes; pleasure was had.

you wouldn't need the tranquilizer with me. i think it would be hot to be dominated by a special gurl without the scare tactic

I never said anything like that, I said it needs a rating of -1 stars because it was that bad. Also think I made myself pretty clear as to why. Being TG and enjoying this site means I have to just ignore a lot. I won't ignore any story that makes being TG some kind of horror show. This story just stinks... for that reason.

To Joscelyn2tg: I get it that transgendered people might feel particularly sensitive about every representation of a transgendered person. When many people don't know (or don't know that they know) anyone from a particular group, it's easy for stereotypes of those in that group to be created. However, I'm not too worried about that in this particular forum.

"Not That Kind of Girl" is a purely imaginary story about *one* person, a transvestite, who feels entitled to dominate, punish, and humiliate people. It is absolutely *not* about *all* transgendered people or *all* transvestites, nor is there any suggestion that the individual is *typical* of transgendered people or transvestites, in particular. "Not That Kind of Girl" is most certainly *not* a "story that makes being TG some kind of horror show," as you claim.

If you read my "Never Going Back Again," I think you'll see that I do not try to make "being TG some kind of horror show." If you read my "I Hate Queers," I think you'll see what I think about the narrow-minded Neanderthals that bash people's non-traditional sexuality.

I don't know whether you'll be receptive to this advice but I would advise you to: relax ... not every story with a transgendered character who isn't all that admirable is an attack on transgendered people. Equality and acceptance isn't achieved when we have an environment where individuals of a given group cannot be portrayed negatively any more than it's achieved when such individuals cannot be portrayed positively.

I think my comments still stand, whether it was a fictional fantasy or not, when you decide, as an author to do something like this, and especially when its posted here, you are making a representation. Whether you say so, lit says so, or the pope for that matter. You posted it and lit doesn't care as long as it meets their edits so I get to try to figure out whats going on. I do that with TAGS! Funny but didn't see rape in there, so I read it. If it had any of the tags like rape or even TG rape, I would not be typing this and you never would have seen my comment. So... why are you bothering, you can delete this comment easy... just add on to your "turnabout" tag and then get the dang TAGS right... [sigh] what does turnabout have to do with this anyway?

Why would I want to delete your comments? I think the discussion is worthwhile. I disagree with you but have no desire to silence your views.

I think you might have missed the point of my response--at least what I was emphasizing. First, my reference to being less worried about unfair stereotypes being created/reinforced "in this particular forum" was not a reference to Literotica, in general. Believe me, I know that there are retrograde troglodytes who read stores on Literotica. Some of my stories have been the target of their wrath. My reference was specifically to the Transsexuals & Crossdressers category, where I've found people to be more sophisticated and subtle. My thought was that most readers of this category on Literotica would not come away from my story thinking that it was a portrayal of all, or typical, crossdressers. Obviously you did come away from it with that impression so perhaps I was wrong. But that was my expectation in advance.

Second, you focus on my mentioning that this was a *fictional* account. I did mention that in passing, probably by the anonymous commentator who said, "I hope it was just a fantasy, and doesn't come from personal experience." But my main point was that the story, regardless of its status as fiction, was about only *one* person. The story casts this person as a crossdresser, but it makes no suggestion that the psychology of the central character is typical of crossdressers, or transgendered people in general. That is why I reject your judgment that the story "makes being TG some kind of horror show." It is not about being TG. As you note in your first comment, "[t]he male in the story is an idiot." I agree. But the story isn't one that "makes being male a sign of idiocy." You can have stories in which a male is an idiot or a rapist, a woman is a slut or a cheater, a crossdresser is a ruthless, vindictive person without saying anything about the nature of men, women, or crossdressers in general.

As you wish... based on your current score for this story I would have expected at the least, a change in the tags, if for no other reason than common courtesy. But if you want endless arguing over what you think a representation is, no thanks. My next chapter will be tagged with tag rape. Its because at this point in my life I was raped and its an important part of my story. Have you been raped? If you don't believe anything else I've said here believe this... You never forget it, every stink, every word and noise stays locked in your brain, and ya got me... I started off thinking "whoa this can't be right, I've read his other stories, lemme keep reading" but it was everything I've tried to avoid. And who was responsible for this rape? Someone like me supposedly, although even that was tough to follow, could not for the life of me understand her motives, and I tried very hard. If all this means is you were looking for an arg about what a "representation" is or might be... you do as you wish. I'm done here.

Story wasn't written badly. Everything was pretty clear and very descriptive. Not hard to follow at all. The only problem was that the "young lady" had all the warmth of Ted Bundy or Charles Manson. In other words the story, which was suppose to leave the reader with a good feeling or at least aroused, failed miserably. Could have redeemed it all by her kissing him and say. "Same time next week again baby?" Joscelyn was correct.

That would have solved the whole mess, and even made it funny [sigh] but it'll never happen. Thanks for the good thought though.

Joscelyn2tg: I have resubmitted "Not That Kind of Girl" adding the tag 'nonconsent'. Literotica does not allow 'rape' as a tag. Because of that limitation on Literotica, I would suggest that you avoid stories that have tags such as 'nonconsent' and 'forced'. (And I would note that if, as you say, you're trying to use 'rape' as a tag to avoid stories, it's not a very effective filter.) I would note that my original submission did include 'humiliation', 'control', and (importantly) 'forced'. I had intended the last, especially, to indicate the nonconsensual nature of the sexual encounter portrayed. But adding 'nonconsent' makes that clearer.

Rape is a terrible crime and I'm certain that the experience of rape would affect one's ability to hold fictional descriptions of such acts at arm's length as the objects of fantasies. I'm sorry that my story caused you distress.

And, by the way, *I* was not "looking for an arg about what 'representation' is, or might be." I was merely presenting my response to your allegation that the story "makes being TG some kind of horror show." The story says nothing about *being TG*. It says something about *someone who is* TG (if we include crossdressers among TG people). You can say you're "done here," of course. That's fine. And you can *be* done here. But it's worth noting that, before you left, you said nothing in your comments to support the claim that this story "makes being TG some kind of horror show." That was not my intention and I deny that it was the effect of the story on anyone who does not assume that *every* TG character is a representative for *all* TG people.

Griffin57: Your suggested ending would have made the story quite a different one, as you well know because that's the point of suggesting it. I disagree with you that a fictional story is always "supposed to leave you with a good feeling." Some should; some should not. As to the objective of leaving people aroused, it's worth noting that this story did that for a number of people who commented publicly and for even more who sent me feedback. Different strokes ... and all that.

I declined to rewrite the story to make the narrator more sympathetic or to make the whole scenario a set-up scenario played out by consenting participants. Joscelyn2tg said in her original post that "since there is NO background anywhere for her, all we can do is feel sorry for her." I guess I don't understand that. I did not intend to portray the narrator as a sympathetic character and I'm not sure why someone would feel sorry for her. But, for those who wish not to read stories with lead characters with which they do not sympathize (as Joscelyn2tg and Griffin57 *might*), for the resubmission, I did add the tag: 'evil lead character'. Don't know whether that will help anyone but, in case it does, I'm happy to add it.

Subject matter not entirely my cup of tea, but I read to the conclusion because this was so extremely well written.

Not into drugs to get sex. Worked at a detox center and saw what it does to peoples lives Both hard and 'rec' drugs. Cant read it.

Every time she does this, the hotel finds another victim tied to the bedposts and notifies police. The police find the DNA she left on the scene, find the hotel CCTV of this gal checking in under fake ID, get a statement from each victim. Some don't want to talk, some are married, cheating on a partner or afraid to be outed but a few are single and have nothing more to lose by making a police statement. A few more come out of the woodwork to complain when the DVD's start showing up with the entire crime on video. In any case, if the victims didn't call police, the innkeeper did.

Because she keeps doing this to multiple victims, keeps leaving her DNA behind and keeps leaving video behind, eventually she's seen once too many at the same hotel or the same bar and the cops ask for a DNA sample. She refuses, they show up at her house with a search warrant and take everything from her camcorder to her hairbrush. The DNA and video match, she's put on trial and sentenced by a judge who is oblivious that, because she still has male anatomy, she's going to a male prison.

If she's up for sexual assault and forcible confinement? Odds are, her new cellmates are equally lovely and adorable characters... who haven't had a woman in years. Do you see where this is going? It might be a little less awkward if she's just a TV/CD (who can de-transition by changing out of the lady clothes into a fashionable set of striped PJ's) and more awkward if she's a full TS (which involves permanent, physiological changes) but the outcome would be interesting in any case.

There was a widely-reported case a week ago where a transwoman in Bath UK was convicted of head-butting a bartender hard enough to knock some teeth out - she was sentenced to 12 weeks and sent to a notorious male prison, despite being a 26-year-old fox with ample breasts, no-longer-working male parts and a face that would turn boys' heads anywhere, even outside gaol. The authorities only rectified their mistake after a 150000-signature change.org petition and coverage in UK national media including the Beeb and the Guardian. In the meantime, she was left to rot in a hospital ward (not even a proper segregation unit) with male inmates yelling "show your tits" and harassing her constantly. No joke.

By all means, write this up as a sequel. Since you seem to be presenting this as sexual fantasy, a play-by-play description of the session in the prison shower would be titillating. Just put some sort of warning in the first paragraph so that, if this gets filed in TS/CD and not "non-consent/reluctance" those who don't want to read a sicko rape story can skip over it until reading to the end where she's found having hanged herself from the cell bars using a bedsheet as a noose after years of abuse and harassment in a male prison. After all, some of us have a weak stomach for this.

Really good story just sad it was rushed, would of been good maybe if there was more talking or pleading?... But really awesome. Maybe next chapter she catches a billion dollar play boy ?