All Comments on 'Not The First Time He Imagined'

by super_chicken

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
all right!

Nice job. You had my attention from the first paragraph. And that's important when there are millions of words to read. Like to see more. . . .

PS great pic on your bio page!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Great Story

Im an older bisexual guy, and i found your story quite enjoyable to read...i can certainly see where a virgin taking 8" from a chick trying to make it feel rough would hurt. I will say in closing that i prefer the real thing; the most wonderful thing about it is that out of control feeling you get when all of those nerve endings are activated which seldom get any usage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
good job

I'm in agreement with the rest of the readers... this is an enjoyable read!

And your profile pic is now with my screen-saver.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Enjoyed it ... a lot. Very different, very unique.

Kept me interested right from the beginning and never let me go - captivating!

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