All Comments on 'Now I Lay Her Down to Sleep Ch. 01'

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UnderstatementUnderstatementover 11 years ago
More!

Please, keep writing!! This is fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good development...

Can't wait for the next chapter...thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

Great start to a hot story. Good flow and you are developing the characters. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.

OpenWordsOpenWordsabout 2 years ago

What a pathetic, sad little cuck. Getting a girl hot, wet and ready for another man. Jesus, how do you find that sexy? Sad little simps...

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