All Comments on 'Now I Lay Her Down to Sleep Ch. 01'

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OpenWordsOpenWordsover 2 years ago

What a pathetic, sad little cuck. Getting a girl hot, wet and ready for another man. Jesus, how do you find that sexy? Sad little simps...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My 2 cents

Great start to a hot story. Good flow and you are developing the characters. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good development...

Can't wait for the next chapter...thanks.

UnderstatementUnderstatementover 11 years ago
More!

Please, keep writing!! This is fantastic!

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