All Comments on 'Nowhere Man Ch. 02'

Right, he'd have to be insane to complain. I would love to be in his position.

Have anything to add to the story? We're waitig!!

Jeff Foxworthy is funny. You're not.

I HAVE READ MANY OF THESE STORYS BUT I HAVE NEVER REPLIED TO ONE. GREAT HUMOR' GREAT STORY' GREAT SEX. WHAT MORE CAN I SAY.

Great story - I laughed my ass off. The shrink was perfect. I was a little concern in part 1 I though we were in for another wimpy/cuckold. NOTSO! Great twist, great explanation of thoughts and emotions.

Wonderful! I only would have liked a little more sex details.

Ok the first part was ok! But the second part was delicious!

I can't agree on what they do but if this is what works for them so be it! Salavie!!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

the sexual aspect of this story was fantastic, but the ending, with the shrinks comment, made me laugh so hard I cried.

Sexy Funny and very good.

he is crazy.

nicely written.

Thanks again.

I wasn't sure I was going to like this story. It turned out real well. He didn't lose a thing.

You've gotta write more stuff like this... This was the second time I read this story, and it was even funnier this time round! I don't even know who's wright or wrong anymore, although I suspect it was this funny because you kept them more or less even. Still, great work!

Wow! What a totally professional and sales oriented husband and wife team. Can't help loving them and their ingenious ideas for promoting sales LOL! Seriously HDK, I love the humour you inject into so much of your writing. A few more chapters by all means. Pete.

I didn't want to read this at first, but after an internal dialog, resolved to try it. Great pacing, terrific phrasing, and an incredibly funny storyline. This solution is not for everyone (anyone?), but it worked for this couple. I would have loved to have seen more interludes, but the pair supported the premise. I don't know if two accounts would have made that significant a turnaround in their finances, but it sure got the couple talking. Thanks for a very entertaining read!

I may well have left a comment here some time ago when first I read your story. But wow!. Excellent, excellent. Really great. Humor, interest, moving -- and more humor. If anything, better the second time around.

Thanks so much

It is nice to see 90% of the readers enjoying a fantasy!

But I absolutely love it...!!!!!!!!!!!!

Men that are aroused by their wives have sex with other men are usually repressed bisexuals or homosexuals that are using their wives as sexual proxies.

We see you are such a wonderful author--not...if you do not like someones stories don't read them....if anyone has issues around here it would be you.

"Men that are aroused by their wives have [sic] sex with other men are usually repressed bisexuals or homosexuals that are using their wives as sexual proxies."

I guess we now understand the meaning behind your screen name. Thanks for the explanantion.

all of them and then bitch like the fag you are. Keep writng HDK and really piss off these asses!!!

Likewise, we were worried this was another wimpy/slut story with fags like shoe trying to distort the story as usual. But HDK you had a great twist in there!

and better than ever........

How did you know I would be an ingenue for buttered asses? Have you been reading my diary.....WELL HAVE YOU!

to the nth degree. Really enjoyed it, keep them coming.

Yeah right - what a cool idea - bizzzzarre - yep fun oh yeah and painfully possible - rofl -

I wasn't too impressed with part 1, but I found myself enjoying it despite my reservations. You won me over with part 2. Very enjoyable.

Not really the way you'd like to see a struggling couple deal with marital turmoil: pimping each other out. Couldn't find a way to see this as tongue-in-cheek or straight out satire.

Wow, some readers of Lit are so uptight. Geez, they are just stories folks. And this is a damn good one with a sense of lightness and fun that is all too rare on this site. The older I get the more I realize that it is not the physical sex that is important. It is the emotions and attitudes that accompany the joining of two bodies. What is important is that everyone is on the same page, no one is hurt and there is no disrespect shown to anyone. Of course if any of these are not present then there is really no agreement and this is what most Loving Wives stories of cheating are about.

i was laughing my ass off the whole time.......with the laptop in my lap....it was kinda tough to read the words which were jumping all over the place. Well written and i loved the quips. Keep it up...:)

Somehow I new that I wouldn't be disappointed. The best improvement possible.

OH YEAH

Knew knew knew knew

I can't believe I did that.

than chapter 1.

Laughed my buttered biscuit off.

Still hilarious no matter how many times I read it!

They both deserve to catch some incurable disease.

If you took it too serious I suppose you could nitpick it apart,but if you take it with tongue in cheek it's hilarious.

Thanks for the entertainment

This has to be one of the most delightful and entertaining romps I've ever read! It was dreary at the start, then turned into a pure fantasy escapades. The only thing was it ended too soon! I was hoping for more reconciliation between husband and wife, mixed with more exciting encounters between clients for her and clients and maybe coworkers of hers for him. Please understand, normally I LOATHE men enjoying their wives getting fucked and them putting up with it. But this was different, it was fun! I guess it was the way you were able to show them as a couple that had totally grown apart, but then being drawn back into a loving relationship. Along with the very important fact that there was no hiding going on, no sneaking around and no one in pain.

If you ever read this comment, please take it as it's meant, as praise of the highest order for your writing ability.

Well butter my ass. A good story.

Great ending!

There's no better way to discover whether a situation or custom is really great, and important, than to see if it will stand up to being ridiculed. A successful parody like this one has to be based on that premise, and in a way is the most sincere form of tribute. So all those who criticized this very well-written little masterpiece ought to sit back and understand that they are tearing down the very principle of married fidelity when they object to what you have written.

We get to see some very good stories on this website, and more than a few of them flow from your pen -- or keyboard, to be more accurate. Thank you for many good laughs in the few pages of this tale. I realize that you said it all, yet you left me wanting more!

Oh, and by the way, the shrink was hilarious!

a fitting ending. Thanks for the offering.

How in the world did I miss this the first time around? Hilarious, you are the best!!!

As a comedy it was hilarious. As a look at a married relationship, it was a trainwreck. He's pimping out his wife to increase his sales and make more money. Money, money, money. That's what is really floating his boat as he sells his wife's ass. And she's returning the favor, pimping him out to her Boss to save her job and make more money. I guess they're equal in the pimping and money business. Not very nice people.

Not my cup of tea.

LOL, I'm with the Doc!

He IS a dumb fuck!

I thought he might have to service some fat pigs for Regina, instead he has a second hot fuck!

The humor made the read worth while. There is no cheating going on, so it is hard to get down on that angle. However, the prospects of a future happy ending are bleak at best. She is far too anxious to spend her next long weekend with Charlie. The weekend every quarter she agreed to without consulting her husband.

On the other hand, he was really smitten with the new Regina. It is easy to anticipate that they would eventually draw closer to outside interests and further from each other.

Of course perhaps that is not too bad as they appeared to be destined for divorce at the beginning of the story anyway.

Excellent writing as usual. Thanks.

I like how the tale came around full circle, from Charlie's crudeness to the psychiatrist's. Good job.

You certainly made a beautiful 180 degree turn with your story. I found it entertaining along with several smiles. Thanks.

....as some of your other stories, but still brought out many chuckles and a guffaw or two.

The really fun part was the way you took a fairly glum scenario at the beginning of part 1 and transformed it into a fun, bawdy, funny tale with a great follow-through in part 2.

Thanks again for a fun read!

There was no reason for Charlie to go to a shrink. His problem was obvious. He was caught up in the middle of a fictional story on Literotica thas was so bad that Charlie should have been seeing a lawyer to sue whoever was responsible for this travesty.

A good,HOT follow-up to "Nowhere Man"! Nice to see Henry gradually turn his wife's prudish boss into "My Fair Slut".

The whole thing with Henry telling the story to a shrink gave the story a whimsical feel. ~ 5 ~

Usually, HDK stories start out good and then suck at the end. This is the complete opposite. The first Chapter was terrible; the second chapter is terrific. And it's not because the guy is getting laid. It's a nice story with a happy ending. It's nice to see that Henry was able to bring Regina out of her shell. Still kind of repulsed thinking of Gwen being with the fat pig Charlie. At least Regina will take Henry's mind off of that.

PATHETIC

You are my favorite author here on Lit and I very rarely write a comment. So here’s to you. An10 out of 10.

On a different note don’t make us wait any longer for more escapades of the beautiful lady president and her entourage the queen and king the lady in red

What planet isBbump41 on?.

I should have known this was a send-up and taken Ch. 1 as such.

The disparity in scores between Chs. 1 and 2 reflect more the cuckold aspect of Ch. 1.

The Dan Rather reference and mimicking was priceless!

STOP, PLEASE STOP THE PATHETHIC SHITTY STORIES.

COULDN'T AGREE MORE WITH THE ANONYMOUS BELOW. YOUR LACK OF CAPITALIZATION DEMONSTRATES YOUR INHERENT CUCK STATUS. REAL MEN DON'T SCREW AROUND WITH LOWER CASE LETTERS.

GROW A PAIR, MR. DAYSKNIGHT.

A little better this time, but not one of your best.

Duds in a row. Signed: BTW

Hilarious!! 5 Stars!!!

All the pussy commenters named anonymous are wimps!!

"Your problem is you are a dumb fuck!"

This was a lot of fun. I bet you were smirking and outright laughing all the time you were writing :)

I don't know why people take these stories so seriously. I guess it is the emotions that hit so close to home for most. This was nicely refreshing as a change of pace and to lighten the angst this section usually produces. Keep up the good work!

Fun story, Loved the last paragraph.

The Doc is a remarkable gent. He should take him on that offer.

To think that some of your reviewers actually believe that any portion of the story you've just written, bore any resemblance to rabid or erotic fantasy is past comprehension - don't they know you also sell duff gold mines and London Bridge as minor side lines?

5 pointy things for being able to hold onto your own sense of reality whilst penning this docudrama!

I laughed my ass off -- and it was erotic besides. 5* for this original piece.

You can bet he will stay psychologically warped! Great story!

Hilarious.

You had been reading to much JPB, when you wrote this HDK. Thanks KS

Sick, sick, ultra sick -- so why the fuck did I give it 5*?

Very wierd, but it made me laugh.

All in fun. I still dislike sharing his wife. It’s something I can’t even imagine doing. I could give this 4 stars at best.

Bill S.

That was great. I laughed so hard I cried. Great story.

Made me smile! 5*s.

So now it's his turn to be the whore?

Of course this is BRILLIANT, just like the flipside. HOWEVER, everyone - except a few - hated when the husband offered the wife the chance to sleep with the customer to improve family earnings - and help make sales. Their comments despised that and dumped on HDK, giving him 1's. Hated the story when it was creative, well done, and extrememly successful for all 3 characters and the company the MC worked for. What is the matter with you readers? You sound as screwed up as Elvis Presley - "wives are virgins on pedestals and all other love objects are whores!" Isn't this what Literotica is trying to move us away from. WHAT THE Fxxx? - why can't the wife offer her body to help make money for the family - you readers think the Husband being offered is fine in this story. but not the other way.