All Comments on ''O' Hunters'

What a great story, it created a very sexy and sensual mood and then the action especially with 2 women was great !! Got me so hard. Please keep writing and maybe in the next Chapter, they can add something new to experiment with among the 3 of them. Thank you.

Trying to discribe what three people are doing at the same time gets a little confusing,

I liked it because you kept each person in the text. They certainly were "O" hunting, & found them in plenty.

Thanks for a good read.

Threesome is always my favourite. Top it up with a creampie and it will be the best.

4* I enjoyed the story.

So nice of your girlfriend Kris to share you with Amy and to help show Amy how to unwind after working late.

Good description of 3 people not only accepting but also eager for sex. Kris' willingness to share and without jealousy or feeling threatened is what makes this threesome work. A generous lady.

Generous use of dialog where appropriate as opposed to just telling the story with narration and no/little dialog.

What is missing to make this a first class story is an emotional connection, where the relationship is built by activities other than sex and by discussion of sex and feelings.

Still, a good description of loving, respectful sex and each wanting to help the other, and without resorting to crude language.

Paul in Oklahoma

Gotta love a wife who shares your talents with her girlfriend

Great story. Well thought out and written. Good characters and plenty of hot sex! Thank you for sharing your vision and talents