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Click hereOur swing club still only has seven regular couples and of course Julie's sisters. We still party twice a month though Sean, Lacey, Pam, Rich, Sandra and Bill still get together with Maria, Anna, Julie and me. We have become quite close and we spend almost every day together when were not at work.
Though my back yard was done for Julie and me to enjoy, it is often the site of many of our parties. It is also where everyone loves to sunbathe. It is not uncommon for me to come home and find several naked women and men lying around my pool soaking up the sun. There is also a lot of sex around that pool whether it's under the waterfall in the pool or around on one of the large boulders.
Julie and I still love the desert and Maria and Anna have learned to love it just as much. In fact both girls have mastered the art of rock climbing in a four by four as well as Julie and I have. We spend at least one weekend with Julie's sisters and one week end by ourselves every month out in the desert.
As for my poor health that is a thing of the past. On my last visit to the doctors I was told that I could return to my old job with out fear. I thanked the doctor but I also told him I could never do that again. Besides I kept my hand in the market as I oversee several portfolios and I've learned that was all I really needed. I also found I loved teaching and I loved my present life more then anything else I could dream of.
In the beginning of this story I sounded like I regretted the move I made but that couldn't be further from the truth. I knew if I didn't make this move I could have died but I did make it and now I'm in heaven.
- COMMENTS
venomlegionsover 1 year agoI read this story a very long time ago... but, after a reread... I found it littered with spelling errors, misused punctions or no punctions where needed. Whomever edited this story, did a lousy job. The readability and flow were hampered by such errors. That's one of the common mistakes her on Lit... people just don't know how to properly edit.
Second, even though this is a transgender story... the straight up man-to-man gay sex was unnecessary and rather distasteful in a rather erotic love story! Even if a straight guy falls for a trans... they're not gonna have gay sex with men... so, the whole gay thing should've never been in this story! The whole orgy thing was farfetched, especially with the sisters involved. This element could've been better without the gay sex. It didn't help the story... it was rather a buzzkill!
Finally, overall... the story was good for half the reading... if not more so... the orgy killed it...
Caseyjoabout 3 years agoSuch a wonderfully written story. Thank you! Where can I find a romantic sugar daddy like Ted?
Anonymousover 7 years agoLoved it, had a tear in my eye when dad appeared. keep writing!!
Love,
Rory
pelicanbillover 12 years agoJ have just finished the complete series. It has to be one of the best serials I have read. Well devekoped, well narrated. One small criticism - your spell checker let you down occasionally. Thank you
Trueskyabout 13 years agoI loved the whole thing especially the swinger part and how the couples got together very often to have orgies. I didn't think it couldve got better till you added her two hot sisters that liked orgies and fucking one another as well.
Purple_Raihneabout 15 years agoI had to come reread this beautiful masterpiece again after reading Jackie. Except for the telltale grammar errors like "of cause" instead of "of course", I can't bring myself to believe that hateful mean-sprited garbage and this beautiful sensitive impossibly understanding story were written by the same person. I wish I could understand how Scribler went from this amazing masterpiece, so understanding and sensitive of real transwomen, to a horrifying hateful piece of garbage like Jackie. I just can't fathom the drastic change.
I wish Scribler would go back to Beautiful work like this, hateful garbage like Jackie is so far beneath Scribler's potential.
Miroku2235over 15 years agoYou sir are truly gifted when it comes to writing. You have found yourself a spot on my Favorites list and I cant wait to read the rest of your works.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis story is very well done. Nice development of characters, a great story approach for some of us who want more than a quickie. The pace was too fast towards the end and too many other characters were quickly included without sufficient development. I cared about the Ted & Julie, who had a very good romantic development, which is very important in erotic writing. I could have continued reading about them in a novel length writing, though their characters would need a bit more depth. I consider myself straight, though my curiosity and fascination with very feminine transgenders continues. I wonder if I would be as loving and accepting as Ted if ever I found a Julie?
But on a critical writing note, you must proofread and correct all errors. This work demonstrates that spellcheck reliance alone will not do. Many little mistakes in errant wording and punctuation gravely affect the flow of reading.
Wellsiealmost 18 years agoWhere on earth do we all find ourselves a Julie?
I can safely say without a doubt that this is the best story I've ever read on here!
Anonymousover 18 years agoa very good story great contex not just about sex but it all went together great as a well written story.
Anonymousover 19 years agoQuite possibly the greatest tale of erotica ever. What an artist!!!
Anonymousover 19 years agoI think I have read this story over five times. When I find a story with deapth I want to rember it. it seemed like a real feasable story. I would love for my wife and I to be invited to a party like that. I only wish you would do more of this story. I am not certain where the direction would go, but I would read so much more about this couple.
