by darkgoddessnight
I have read your first chapter, and well obviously this one as well. I must say this is getting interesting. At first with the first chapter i was trying to wonder how your going to go with this story...but now... things are slowly getting interesting. I do hope though the next chapter(s) it can be longer please. I think it would be a whole lot better if the reader can actually read more than just a page long.
Well goodluck with the rest of the chapters:)
Your first two chapters have been great. I am really enjoying them but when can we expect to read another one. I can't wait
I started reading this story and was getting pretty excited about the plot until I found out that you haven't finished it!!! Please continue this story! I'd like to know what happens!!