All Comments on 'Office Bets'

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Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago
Work romping

Neat story, well written. Very good conversation management throughout.

Thanks for the entertaining concept to think about all day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very hot

Nice story - good build up and very hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
'Neither of Us...

…had any desire to mess up our marriages'

Oh really? In that case they are just plain stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Where's the next chapter?

So many unwritten chapters on many of your stories. Love your work. Hoping you put out more added content to stories already started. Of course your new stuff is always enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Excellent Story

Great job! The characters were well written and believable. Very erotic story. Well done. Super description of them undressing each other.

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...