All Comments on 'Office Hours Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really good

Sad chapter :( Good but sad. She needs to be dominated I think, have someon help her. Maybe not Jason, would ruin the dynamic. Perhaps the Barlow guy? Well done :) Its difgerent, please keep going.

ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Very interesting!

Even if this were not fine writing, I would still follow the story just to see where it goes! Michaels is one troubled lady! Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
very good

keep going with this story,

maybe she should become more aggressive towards jason (to vent it out) and bring him more to her heel

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