All Comments on 'Office Play Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep up the good work. Enjoyed all 4 chpters.

Enjoyed all 4 chapters. Looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
it's unfortunate when

a 5 vote hinges of a glib phrase, "in and of itself". It is not only facile, but meaningless. Poor choice, and it should have been edited out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
wishing

yes, wishing you were single

Rad'lRad'lover 18 years ago
Gold: a great story

Gold:

A great story - marred only by the odd typo ('her' - when you meant 'he'). Maybe it's personal but - I find that typos interrupt the flow of the story.

HRKWHRKWabout 15 years ago
Something to dream about now

I've never had a boss like that. Damn! Why haven't I ever had a boss like that??????!!!!

notusuallyshynotusuallyshyabout 10 years ago
Enjoyed it.

Well written, could've have been more rougher but that's a personal taste of mine, still enjoyed it.

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