by Goldeniangel
Enjoyed all 4 chapters. Looking forward to the next one.
a 5 vote hinges of a glib phrase, "in and of itself". It is not only facile, but meaningless. Poor choice, and it should have been edited out.
Gold:
A great story - marred only by the odd typo ('her' - when you meant 'he'). Maybe it's personal but - I find that typos interrupt the flow of the story.
I've never had a boss like that. Damn! Why haven't I ever had a boss like that??????!!!!
Well written, could've have been more rougher but that's a personal taste of mine, still enjoyed it.