by JANAMARIE
Give us more---please. You developed this story and characters so well I was stiff as an iron rod the whole time I was reading it. AND, you threw in some humor to keep things even more interesting.
MORE PLEASE!
Loved the contrast in the character Judy. On one hand she's this aggressive large-breasted honeypot and on the other she's this near virginal innocent.
This ying-yang impact helped build the arousal. Well done!
Loved the story. You certainly write very good stories. All the ones I have read from your submissions have been excellent. You certainly know how to get my man hard!!
Thanks.
Julie
Yet again you deliver a superb tale - loved the way the story and the romance developed - great writing as usual - look forward to reading more.