All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 026'

Your story is coming together quite lovely and its mysterious. What is really going on with this planet?

I love the way you think, it's fun. I'm curious, though, if you had to work this out in reverse. Otherwise there would seem to be a huge risk of logical failures in the plot, and I haven't found any yet.

Maybe I'm just not seeing them!

Either way, great story.