All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 026'

by Talemaster

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hakdrakkenhakdrakkenalmost 12 years ago
Brilliant

I love the way you think, it's fun. I'm curious, though, if you had to work this out in reverse. Otherwise there would seem to be a huge risk of logical failures in the plot, and I haven't found any yet.

Maybe I'm just not seeing them!

Either way, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing!

Your story is coming together quite lovely and its mysterious. What is really going on with this planet?

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