by katnip_21f
that so-called "sanctity" looks like bullshit if you only mean if the child has your DNA. And that unfettered desire has put the planet in great peril. Of course every baby is a miracle now isn't it?
the illogic that for me needs must break the fantasy is that even after she catches hubby she hesitates on marriage grounds. Uh ah. Fantasies to me imply possibilities, otherwise they are too tame nursery rhymes. You can write, of course, so don't let me deter you. There's a market here for almost everyone. And you've caught me on my new medication day so I'm feeling magnanimous!!!
It was everything I wanted in a story like that and more. I just love dominate men and happy endings. Great job.
I have to say that, I think this was a good story. It was sexy and I also like dominant males in stories. Please keep writing!
it doesnt matter what the comments are. I thought the story was lovely. There is someone out there for all of us sometimes it takes a while to find him/her. Keep writing
I love his dominance and his want to empty his balls in her and impregnate her. I love how she wants to take all the seed he can give..... Please write more of these do. I've cum to it several times already.
Loved it but felt the ending was too rushed. I would have loved to see her go for Todd's jugular in the divorce and have had it end after their twins were born. Hunter would be Todd's boss and fire his sorry ass. The gf would then dump him since he wouldn't be able to give her the lifestyle she wanted and he'd become a drunk and homeless bastard. lol That'll teach him.