All Comments on 'Oh, Library Boy!'

Nice buildup ...and delivery!

Quick and to the point, I like the way you controlled the speed of reading as the passion built.

I lived every moment of this exciting story,

worried that all would be discovered and then I would be humiliated.

I need to make a run to the Library today ;)

Ho yes, a brillant piece of writting,

Look forward to reading many more of your submissions.

Loved the way you developed her character at the start - really set the story up so beautifully. Made me smile when she teased him and yet his complex response added to the humour.

Loved the story: its shortness, its sly humor, its reference to Edna St Vincent Millay (known for burning her candle at both ends :-) ). Keep up the nice work.

Welcum to LE

I really enjoy reading a hot quicky. By quicky I mean no more than one page in length. You somehow managed to describe two character and give some really great action in not a whole lot of words. Congrats because that's not easy to do. Also congrats on the fact that this is one of two storys that make up your first posting on Lit. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Thank you. You may like some of my stories.

liked them both! Can't wait for more.