All Comments on 'Oh My God Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 10 years ago

Awesome

Cute. Can't wait till the next one mate. Thanks, now I got ANOTHER thing to wait for :(

Anonymousover 10 years ago

I liked it, but the word is THROUGH not THRU, thru is for texting not to be used in a story, would it kill you to take a second to write the whole word?

Anonymousover 10 years ago

yikes, really forced dialogue. want to keep reading but this is so clunky. the characters don't need to SAY everything.

nekoca almost 9 years ago

Love this story so far!

This is a great story!

Horseman68 over 6 years ago

Great Start.

Will see where this leads.

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Retired from the US Air Force. Second career as a software engineer and System Administrator. I appreciate the comments on my work, even the negative ones. I checked the Salmon and there were a couple of paragraphs that some how got left out of the submission. They expla...

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