by HarryC
too clever for some. good punch line;it doesn't have to be about actual sex,does it?
I was expecting a man and woman, and turns out it's a woman and woman. Very good! I loved the outcome.
I love your varied description and long, slow build. Probably as intended, I desperately wanted the physical connection at the end.
The story is listed as incest and yet it never mentions their relation. Are they sisters? Cousins? It would even work if they were just best friends, but then it shouldn't be listed as incest. Also why title Oh, My Pregnant head? There is not mention of either woman being pregnant.
Yes, most reading this will not get it. As a red blooded American male, I can vouch that most men are to self centered to think past their small head. We can't (or won't)think about how others feel. The inter play in this story is powerful, and very well written . thank you. V