All Comments on 'Oh, My Pregnant Head'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
very, very good.

Yes, most reading this will not get it. As a red blooded American male, I can vouch that most men are to self centered to think past their small head. We can't (or won't)think about how others feel. The inter play in this story is powerful, and very well written . thank you. V

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad but...

The story is listed as incest and yet it never mentions their relation. Are they sisters? Cousins? It would even work if they were just best friends, but then it shouldn't be listed as incest. Also why title Oh, My Pregnant head? There is not mention of either woman being pregnant.

AkireonAkireonalmost 17 years ago
Luxuriant

I love your varied description and long, slow build. Probably as intended, I desperately wanted the physical connection at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Shocker

I was expecting a man and woman, and turns out it's a woman and woman. Very good! I loved the outcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
philistines

too clever for some. good punch line;it doesn't have to be about actual sex,does it?

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