by HungryGuy
If you're going to write similar stories (oh poo poo) DON'T COPY IT WHOLESALE AND CHANGE THE NAMES! You fail.
If there was ever a real life opening for the womens toilets wich would be the best damn job in the world, I'd volunteer for 6 consecutive terms hands down. I'd even pay the club owner and suck his dick every day for the privilege.
I don't the author has a clue what piss tastes like. Never have I experienced it to be a "gritty liquid."
As long as one can remain healthy, serving ladies like that would be a hawt experience of objectification.