by StillnessIsTheTruth
THIS STORY IS VERY CONFUSING !!!!!! WHAT IN THE WORLD ARE THESE CREATURES ? AND WHAT PRECISELY DO THEY REALLY LOOK LIKE ?????? NEEDS A HECK OF A LOT OF BACK STORY AND LESS CONFUSING CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS AND ROLES IN THE STORY !!!! THE PLOT JUMPS AROUND A LOT TOO !!!!