All Comments on 'Olivia Ch. 04'

THIS STORY STARTED SLOW ,BUT YOU SEEMED TO BE ON THE RIGHT TRACK NOW ,LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT CHAPTER

Don't leave us hanging? What happened three months into her training? Did Olivia do a year? Did her family find her and free her the next day? Is she completely broken and turned into a fuck toy? Inquiring minds want to know......

The scores were pretty low so I figured no one wanted more. So, for you I'll get back to this in the new year. Not sure what is to happen but a twist is needed, any ideas?

PLEASE DONT,LEAVE US HANGING THE STORY IS STARTING TO GET INTERESTING.

BOB

I loved the entire story so far.Can not wait to see how she is trained.Gave a 5 star for the series.

A lot of readers might enjoy the story, but not vote on it. I know I rarely vote on stories just because I never got into the habit.

I'd like to see the next chapter involve her getting her marks. A tattoo has been promised, but what about some nice big nipple rings to remind her of her place as a gang slut? Instead of doing a day-by-bay story line, how about just visiting in once-a-week to see what she's had to go through and how it's affecting her mental state? Two or three months of captivity to thoroughly indoctrinate her into this new lifestyle, then she gets a break and is able to return to her old home. Everyone's been looking for her..... then one of her old flames finds out about what she "learned" and takes advantage of her new-found submissiveness........

Like it! Will get this done soon.

No, please StoryTeller07, don't stop, I love your series.