All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 02'

Bloody excellent

A great story as well as erotic, I could'ent want for more

Keep up the great work

Oh ya and thanks for your time to give a bit of pleasure

Keep it up!! Just one small criticism-check your editing. You have too excellent a story to muck it up with spelling errors. Not meant to be mean, just constructive. I'm really digging the relationships!!

this is great story i am looking forward to more.

I just finished read both chapter 1 and 2 and want to tell you that i really enjoying them so far keep up the awsome work.

You're an amazing writer. Please see this through to the end.

Great story, can't wait for more.

hoping the next chapters have more action (either sexual or physical)

I thought the first started off a little slow, but the plot here is developing nicely. Keep going.