All Comments on 'On the Beach'

really enjoyed it thank you

This was a great story that didn’t rely on sex to sell it. Even though a bit more wouldn’t have hurt. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more from you soon. If you ever want a test reader I’m your guy.

This was a sweet and enjoyable story. Of course, any dog lover would have fallen for it just because of the canines. Another good story from a good writer.

You're one of the best writers here on Lit. So I hold you to a higher standard (sorry!) To me, this story seemed a bit rushed. I would have liked it to have been longer with more development of the characters. As it is, Jenny still seems to be on the rebound and that makes it less believable that she could develop a long-term relationship with Jeremy. Why does she even consider going back to Roger - it just doesn't make any sense unless she still has feelings for him. Also, what finally happened with the dogs??? I'm a big fan of the romance category and for a story like this I don't mind if the author takes a while to wrap things up. So... 4/5 this time.

Too short! Another page or two needed! 5*

You like wine - its obvious from your stories, add a bit more for us to enjoy. 5*

The fact that she wanted to go back to a black-mailer is daunting. Do they now have four dogs living with them?

love the fact that asshole husband of her got well and truly shafted...should happen to all assholes who treat women with such disdain....